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Quiver

“Quiver”--how soft it glides ‘tween lips and teeth, It almost feels like breathing in a wreath; I can’t find words that can sound as tender Except, possibly, “flower” and “whisper.” “Quiver”--how opposite the image it brings: Both unpleasant and delightful feelings; Like a sore bee sting that gives the shudder, Or a lover’s touch that makes one shiver. A pretty thing makes one quiver with joy, Another quivers in anger at a ploy. One quivers, too, on witnessing horror, But others quiver at a good humor. “Quiver”--what a contradictory term! It may draw a smile or may make one squirm: A gentle breeze that does shake the flowers, Or raging winds that come with rain showers. A harp’s, or guitar’s, or violin’s strings Must quiver before music can take wings; But when the earth quivers, how great the fright As walls come falling no matter the height. April 1, 2023 Among 2nd Place Writing Challenge - ‘Q’ Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 6:31:00 AM
Wow Ryan. This is an imaginative and creative write. I'd never really thought of all that quivers. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/3/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Linda. You are most kind.
Date: 4/3/2023 3:47:00 AM
Ryan, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Ryan Gayagay
Date: 4/3/2023 4:18:00 PM
Thank you very much for appreciating my poem.

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