Quiver

“Quiver”--how soft it glides ‘tween lips and teeth,
It almost feels like breathing in a wreath;
I can’t find words that can sound as tender 
Except, possibly, “flower” and “whisper.”

“Quiver”--how opposite the image it brings:
Both unpleasant and delightful feelings;
Like a sore bee sting that gives the shudder,
Or a lover’s touch that makes one shiver.

A pretty thing makes one quiver with joy,
Another quivers in anger at a ploy.
One quivers, too, on witnessing horror,
But others quiver at a good humor.

“Quiver”--what a contradictory term!
It may draw a smile or may make one squirm:
A gentle breeze that does shake the flowers,
Or raging winds that come with rain showers.

A harp’s, or guitar’s, or violin’s strings
Must quiver before music can take wings;
But when the earth quivers, how great the fright
As walls come falling no matter the height.

April 1, 2023

Among 2nd Place
Writing Challenge - ‘Q’ Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 6:31 AM
Wow Ryan. This is an imaginative and creative write. I'd never really thought of all that quivers. Congratulations on your win! :)
Gayagay Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:17 PM
Thank you, Linda. You are most kind.
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:47 AM
Ryan, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Gayagay Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:18 PM
Thank you very much for appreciating my poem.
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