Quite Electrifying

Touching live wires can be quite electrifying Not only will it kill you, it'll hurt while you're dying You'll scream out bad words Some I've never heard As well as smell like something's frying
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Cunningham Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:02 AM
Ouch fingers like burnt sausages that I manage every summer on the BBQ lol Good day Jack.
Ellison Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 11:19 AM
Should be more careful Thomas!!! Barbecued fingers hurt!!! Good morning... have a great day!!!
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November 21, 2018 at 8:28 AM
Lol! This is one of your best! I love it ~<3 a fave! Good morning sweet Jack! HUGSIES
Ellison Avatar
November 21, 2018 at 9:21 AM
"it'll hurt while you're dying" that's the part I don't like!!!! Sending you electrifying love!!! Happy Jack XOX
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