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Quite Electrifying

Touching live wires can be quite electrifying Not only will it kill you, it'll hurt while you're dying You'll scream out bad words Some I've never heard As well as smell like something's frying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/21/2018 11:02:00 AM
Ouch fingers like burnt sausages that I manage every summer on the BBQ lol Good day Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 11/21/2018 11:19:00 AM
Should be more careful Thomas!!! Barbecued fingers hurt!!! Good morning... have a great day!!!
Date: 11/21/2018 8:28:00 AM
Lol! This is one of your best! I love it ~<3 a fave! Good morning sweet Jack! HUGSIES
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Date: 11/21/2018 9:21:00 AM
"it'll hurt while you're dying" that's the part I don't like!!!! Sending you electrifying love!!! Happy Jack XOX