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Quite Divine

An old lady of years walks all alone on tired legs
          with a face so happy . . . 
at last she has found this dreamy place of long past memory.
            Oh, painted daisy,
she recalls gathering bouquets of them
      under a perfect sky
        of a sweet impossible blue . . . 
          listen to that cool stream babbling on the way to somewhere,
the weeping willow still hangs her head over the water 
          and the blue jay is still singing
on an overhanging branch-   a welcome back song.
          Tired, she lays down . . . 
            closing her ancient eyes for the last time
               she smiles, whispering, life has been quite divine.

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March 30, 2019


Poetry/Free Verse/Quite Divine
Copyright Protected, ID 19-1128-709-02
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.


Written for the contest, Specificity in Poetry
sponsor, Sheri Fresonke Harper

Sixth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Awtry Avatar
May 3, 2019 at 9:05 AM
What a beautiful soul!-- To be able to say even in death that it was all "divine". Congratulations!
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 6:36 PM
Wonderful, Dear Heart. Congratulations.
Harper Avatar
May 2, 2019 at 3:51 PM
Congratulations on your 6th place win, Dear Heart, I loved it because it captured such a lovely place in time, but so sad to think the old woman passed away.
Proxenos Avatar
April 1, 2019 at 1:47 AM
What a wonderful way to go - peacefully and in the midst of nature, A beautiful poem Dear Heart. Poetry hugs - Jenny - holding thumbs for the contest but I would say best for a win!
One Avatar
March 30, 2019 at 5:26 PM
I dont know what this contest is about but you wrote a wonderful poem..
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