Quite Delight

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Tricube Poetry Contest- Sponsor- Oliver McKeithan

Shine the light
Day or night
Make it bright  
 
You just might 
Want to write 
Black and white

It's alright 
Bite the fight
Make it right

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/30/2025 10:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Quite Delight" write. Have a blessed day with your win.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 7/29/2025 12:46:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in my contest Charles. Like the rhyme scheme

Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/28/2025 5:50:00 AM

This one's got a cool bounce to it—simple, sharp, and catchy. Feels like something you'd want to chant out loud when you're trying to hype yourself up or push through. Love the "bite the fight" line!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 6:10:00 PM

Nice Monorhyme poem, Charles. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill