Quite Delight

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Shine the light Day or night Make it bright You just might Want to write Black and white It's alright Bite the fight Make it right

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Rowena Velasco

Date: 7/28/2025 5:50:00 AM

This one's got a cool bounce to it—simple, sharp, and catchy. Feels like something you'd want to chant out loud when you're trying to hype yourself up or push through. Love the "bite the fight" line!

Bill Baker

Date: 7/25/2025 6:10:00 PM

Nice Monorhyme poem, Charles. I like it! A poet friend in Texas, Bill