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Quintains For Claude Raines

I’ve never been to Sicily, and yet it’s always felt a part of me. Who knows? Another life, another alphabet? Alongside Archimedes, jotting prose in Agrigentum I, with each vignette, imbibing wine, as bitter as regret, harangued the hellene farmers, stoning crows. That Greek me – did I tend (as now) to get frustrated when my verse was ‘on the nose’, all too transparently in Homer’s debt? But Italy’s a credible coquette, more winning in her ways than we suppose. Like Rhapsody in Blue’s smooth clarinet, she captures us. We victims, in love’s throes, admire her steely claws, as black as jet. Written October 11, 2022

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Date: 10/31/2022 1:32:00 AM
Beautifully written and such effortless rhymes, congratulations on your win
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Michael Coy
Date: 11/8/2022 2:57:00 AM
Thank you, Terry. I'm very grateful to you. Michael
Date: 10/30/2022 12:01:00 PM
Your last stanza grabbed me Michael. The entire poem with the classics and classical moved me. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Michael Coy
Date: 10/30/2022 12:24:00 PM
You are so kind! A huge thank you.
Date: 10/30/2022 9:24:00 AM
Michael, your vocabulary and rhyming skills are to be commended. Congratulations on your winning write.
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Michael Coy
Date: 11/2/2022 8:33:00 AM
I'm delighted that you liked it. Thank you, Jenna.
Date: 10/30/2022 8:49:00 AM
Exquisite rhymes and classical allusions are compelling in this winning poem in my Quintain (Sicilian) contest. Congratulations, Michael!
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Michael Coy
Date: 11/2/2022 8:32:00 AM
I would like to offer my thanks and plaudits for such a challenging (and fun) competition.
Date: 10/12/2022 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this one today. Very creative and the rhymes spectacular. Sara
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Michael Coy
Date: 10/12/2022 3:25:00 PM
Sara, I'm very grateful to you for your generous words.

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