Quilts of Comfort-N

I met a woman with body so firm and fresh
Tasted without shame the love’s powers
Amazed and gazed upon the mound Venus
In the velvet cavity between her thighs.

To be ravished on the linen dearly paid
Let her ache for thrust of male firmness
Let her loins hunger to have me inside
Feel her two points of two love globes.
 
Loosen the manhood  beneath her clothes
Drew it into her entrails with a mighty thrust
Evaded her body voluptuous and sensuous 
Made love causing dislodge her bones so cute.


In the clench of his fist man’s power lies
But the power of woman elsewhere lies



*****This is quite a fictional write*****
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Contest: Fanning the Embers of Catie Lindsey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Davis Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:57 PM
Dr. Ram This poem is making me hotter than the weather already has. I am blushing and need some cooling off. LOL Thank you for the sweet comment on my Hope And Faith poem.
Anderson Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 10:45 PM
Hey Dr. Ram, just wanted to say thnx for leaving comments on my writes...I appreciate it.... Later, Jimmy
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October 8, 2010 at 4:13 PM
I like this side of you my friend....perfect entry.....Michael
Hayner Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 7:02 AM
7 as always! Phat- pretty hot and tempting! Love the politics! Thanks for commenting on my work!
Chowdhury Avatar
October 8, 2010 at 6:36 AM
an interesting write, thanks for sending comments on my poem. take care
Mcneil Avatar
October 7, 2010 at 7:44 AM
Really enjoyed this Dr Ram, and thank you for the comments on my work.Ryan
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October 6, 2010 at 6:05 PM
once again excellent works again dr thank you [duncan]
Keogh Jr. Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 4:47 PM
You get the 7 and I get... never mind. This is one of your best, I think and highly charged with eootic frisson. Regards from Gerard.
La France Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 6:55 AM
aaaah.. this is like very HOT, you kind of surprised me, Dr, you sort of seem so dignified, I guess a man can be dignified and hot!!!! Best of luck..
Moreno Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 6:32 AM
A steamy and wonderful write you have here, nice work...Raul
Eggins Avatar
October 6, 2010 at 6:23 AM
This is seductively hot Dr Mehta ... good luck in the competition and thank you for your always kind comments on my poems love Jayne
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:11 PM
GOOD GRIEF, DR.RAM.now I know where you got your NAME. THIS IS very sexy. Best one yet! Luv, Andrea
Ruebel Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 2:12 PM
To blush, to smile, at last I understood........ Thank you, Shar
Mehta Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Steamy & Juicy Sonnet full of tender aggression ..... Nice read. Best Luck for Catie's contest. I Thank U for appreciative comments on my poetry. Luv/Best wishes always... Hitendra
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 9:39 AM
A pleasure to read your amazing poetry today Dr. Ram. I wish you the best in your endeavors whatever they may be and the best in Catie's contest. I thank you so much for you kind comments on my poetry. Love, Carol
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October 5, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Hi Dr Ram.Wow!Very hot and very sensuous writing.And the last line very true-although we do now have a brain-!Congratulations on your academic achievment.I am humbled in your presence.Opportunity never presented itself to me so I am self taught through reading.And I am grateful for the gift of empathy and the words I use to convey it.Thank you for your comments on my latest poem.Good luck with yours.Luv June(Sylvia)
Hales Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:40 AM
love this ...its my type of poetry great lines ..ty for all my comments you make on my work ty again dear friend sarah x
Wellington Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 9:02 PM
Mmmm....Mmmm....Wow! All I can say is double wow!!! Good luck in the contest. Joy (Jew)
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October 4, 2010 at 6:19 PM
Did you get too much celebration at the party?? Well party on!! Hope I can still be around as long as you!! And able to write poetry. (*u*)
Keys Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 4:37 PM
passion with grace - class. i liked this very much. emotionally descriptive. thank you, chuck
Neels Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 3:27 PM
Passionate Sonnet Dr. Ram. Good luck for Catie's contest ;)
Sweetheart Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Spoken and witten like a true man Dr. Ram.. bravo for telling the truth in your lines..luv.. a great passionate entry for Catie .. I hope she is sitting down when reading this one.. a true winner my friend with luv...
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 1:52 PM
wow, you go Dr. Ram, very erotic, good luck in the contest with this steamy poem
Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 12:59 PM
Passionate...Sara
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