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For: Open Poetry 9 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Never have I used such a word as quill in my verbose verse, even when bleeding ink in nightmare night, nor when tripping light fantastic beyond fair golden sunsets; O' come sail away, O' come sail away, O' come sail away with me on the good ship Lollipop where bon-bons play on the beach of Peppermint Bay, or a night trip~ we shall dream awhile in pure purple prose.

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Date: 5/23/2024 7:26:00 PM
I like this imaginative poem. I forgot Shutley Temple but she came to life in your verses. The picture is cute and a good match.
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Date: 5/23/2024 4:50:00 AM
oh this is creative. Love how you used lines from songs to create a flowing poem (oh come sail away, good ship Lollipop, etc.) Enjoyed the notion of dreaming awhile in pure purple prose (great alliteration)! have a splendid day, hugs, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 5/23/2024 6:48:00 AM
Thank you.

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