Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Quietude in a Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1661-280-24
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, July 24, 2024
For the International Contest, Eight Words
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged, 07/27/2024

Third Place

Dreamer

 

Quietude in a Dream

In my dream ... I am swirling in circles,
          lost in a wild turbulent vortex surge;
light flutters and pirouettes with sparkles,
     and at last from the whirlwind ... I emerge.

I am in this secluded place hued green,
          an  illusion airy, misty pretty;
love places not synthetic ... but serene.
     Is this only a place of dreams ? ... Pity !

I do like rustic pastoral terrain,
          but, love this place of flowers, water, trees;
the sun an emanate radiate stain,
     bursting forth, scattered light binging a breeze. 

At dawn ... I watch a sweet blossom unfold,
           in the arising sun they will flourish;
in the silence the scene is bathed in gold,
     the stillness, calmness, quietness ... nourish.

I wish that this was not a timeless dream,
          endless and infinite and eternal;
but, my own sweet perpetual moon beam,
     to a hued place ... when I am nocturnal.

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Joseph May July 28, 2024 at 5:07 AM Very nicely penned Constance, Congrats on your win Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 9:50 AM Joseph, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance

thriveni c mysore July 27, 2024 at 8:24 PM dream like, lovely flow dear poet. congratulations. happy writing. Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 4:44 AM Thriveni, thank you for the compliment, and congratulations, Constance

Paula Goldsmith July 27, 2024 at 9:26 AM Congratulations on your win. What a lovely picture for a lovely write. I enjoyed your 8 word write.   Have a blessed weekend with your win....................... Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 4:45 AM Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, Constance

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2024 at 8:20 PM You made the words sing with beauty, dear heart. Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 4:45 AM Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance

Joanna Daniel July 25, 2024 at 7:43 AM This is so beautiful, Constance:) Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 4:46 AM Joanna, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance

Karen Jones July 24, 2024 at 7:46 PM Lovely flow and whimsical vibes like everyone say as dream! Good contest entry. Constance La France July 28, 2024 at 4:47 AM Karen, thank you for the compliment, Constance

Yann Rolland July 24, 2024 at 12:12 PM beautiful like a dream, enjoyed Constance La France July 24, 2024 at 4:24 PM Yann, thank you for the comment and compliment, yes, exactly what I wanted you to feel, Constance