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Poetry/Rhyme/Quietude in a Dream
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1661-280-24
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, July 24, 2024
For the International Contest, Eight Words
sponsor, Joseph May, Judged, 07/27/2024

Third Place

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In my dream ... I am swirling in circles, lost in a wild turbulent vortex surge; light flutters and pirouettes with sparkles, and at last from the whirlwind ... I emerge. I am in this secluded place hued green, an illusion airy, misty pretty; love places not synthetic ... but serene. Is this only a place of dreams ? ... Pity ! I do like rustic pastoral terrain, but, love this place of flowers, water, trees; the sun an emanate radiate stain, bursting forth, scattered light binging a breeze. At dawn ... I watch a sweet blossom unfold, in the arising sun they will flourish; in the silence the scene is bathed in gold, the stillness, calmness, quietness ... nourish. I wish that this was not a timeless dream, endless and infinite and eternal; but, my own sweet perpetual moon beam, to a hued place ... when I am nocturnal.

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Date: 7/28/2024 5:07:00 AM
Very nicely penned Constance, Congrats on your win
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Date: 7/28/2024 9:50:00 AM
Joseph, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance
Date: 7/27/2024 8:24:00 PM
dream like, lovely flow dear poet. congratulations. happy writing.
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:44:00 AM
Thriveni, thank you for the compliment, and congratulations, Constance
Date: 7/27/2024 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely picture for a lovely write. I enjoyed your 8 word write.   Have a blessed weekend with your win.......................
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:45:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and compliment, Constance
Date: 7/25/2024 8:20:00 PM
You made the words sing with beauty, dear heart.
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:45:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/25/2024 10:20:00 AM
bEAUTIFUL POEM.
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:46:00 AM
Joy, thank you for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/25/2024 7:43:00 AM
This is so beautiful, Constance:)
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:46:00 AM
Joanna, thank you so much for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 7:46:00 PM
Lovely flow and whimsical vibes like everyone say as dream! Good contest entry.
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Date: 7/28/2024 4:47:00 AM
Karen, thank you for the compliment, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 12:12:00 PM
beautiful like a dream, enjoyed
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Date: 7/24/2024 4:24:00 PM
Yann, thank you for the comment and compliment, yes, exactly what I wanted you to feel, Constance
Date: 7/24/2024 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful photo and start to your poem :)
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Date: 7/24/2024 4:24:00 PM
Tom, I love the photo too and thanks for the compliment, been working on this all day, keep getting interrupted, Constance

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