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Quietly the moon---

The sea is silvered by the moon, its waves rustle the sand where I stand, they speak in whispers to low for my ears to hear. Do they speak of you and where you are, do they know if you are coming home or not? The moon, the waves, the sand, absorb my tears so quietly.

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Date: 3/13/2024 7:17:00 PM
This poem goes to the heart. Knowing where a loved one is gives comfort. You write with modest intensity.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/13/2024 8:05:00 PM
Thank you I try
Date: 3/13/2024 4:06:00 PM
a lovely, poignant poem. The imagery is beautiful and soulful. "Do you know if you are coming home or not?" left me a bit misty eyed as I thought of missing one's spouse or beloved. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/13/2024 4:35:00 PM
Thank you.

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