Quietly I'Ll Be Rude

Never given divorce much thought
Murder weapon haven't bought
Just a case of dog food

Upon demands of tasty hash
It will be ready in a flash
Onions seared big dude  

Not the crying or weepy kind
Getting even is on my mind
Quietly I'll be rude*

Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan
Contest: The Blues In Tail Rhyme
Written: March 9, 2014
*Note: I would never do this.
I saw it in a movie once where 
a woman was being beaten
and abused by her husband..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/18/2014 4:55:00 PM
Awesome Sara....I'd never do it either..haha.thanks for the idea!!!!..:-) :-) kidding:-) :-) PS..some dogfood I buy looks better than some canned people food!!
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Date: 3/13/2014 10:59:00 PM
I don't believe you would do this either Sara but it is a fun poem. Good luck in contest. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/12/2014 12:39:00 AM
Well I'll be doggone I didn't think you were such a hard case Sara (L O L) hope you get a high spot with this in the contest..'
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Date: 3/11/2014 3:14:00 PM
love this clever piece, Sara - so relieved to see it's based on a film, LOL
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:26:00 PM
WOW...now THAT is quite an approach! Great poem, Sara. Your writing entertains but makes me think. This is good!
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:20:00 PM
You write so well...just hinting at a horrible choice...do know you well...but your light-hearted write leaves me in no doubt that you would never do this. Thanks also for your comments on my poem...cheers H.
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Huberta Van Akkeren
Date: 3/10/2014 9:21:00 PM
Sorry the above should read do not know you well...sorry thinking faster than typing...
Date: 3/10/2014 5:45:00 PM
cool title on this revenge tale!! Hey, I may be wrong, but double check her rules. I was thinking it could be only two stanzas!!?
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Date: 3/9/2014 3:14:00 PM
- Good for the contest, Sara - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/9/2014 1:09:00 PM
you seethe with much justification, sara... an intense write that speaks of liberation.. love this!.. huggs
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Date: 3/9/2014 12:47:00 PM
Should I classify it as black humour! very good write. // paul ps. gl re contest
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Date: 3/9/2014 7:10:00 AM
Wow I really enjoyed reading this cleverly written poem here this morning! I understand that this poem is unlike what you usually write, but it is very powerful and very effective! This is a terrific poem here my friend! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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