Sara Kendrick Poet Tail-rhyme

Quietly I'Ll Be Rude

Never given divorce much thought
Murder weapon haven't bought
Just a case of dog food

Upon demands of tasty hash
It will be ready in a flash
Onions seared big dude  

Not the crying or weepy kind
Getting even is on my mind
Quietly I'll be rude*

Sponsor: Black-Eyed Susan
Contest: The Blues In Tail Rhyme
Written: March 9, 2014
*Note: I would never do this.
I saw it in a movie once where 
a woman was being beaten
and abused by her husband..

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Donna Jones March 18, 2014 at 4:55 PM Awesome Sara....I'd never do it either..haha.thanks for the idea!!!!..:-) :-) kidding:-) :-) PS..some dogfood I buy looks better than some canned people food!!

Joyce Johnson March 13, 2014 at 10:59 PM I don't believe you would do this either Sara but it is a fun poem. Good luck in contest. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce

Joe Maverick March 12, 2014 at 12:39 AM Well I'll be doggone I didn't think you were such a hard case Sara (L O L) hope you get a high spot with this in the contest..'

Jack Horne March 11, 2014 at 3:14 PM love this clever piece, Sara - so relieved to see it's based on a film, LOL

Michael Wegman March 10, 2014 at 9:26 PM WOW...now THAT is quite an approach! Great poem, Sara. Your writing entertains but makes me think. This is good!

Huberta Van Akkeren March 10, 2014 at 9:20 PM You write so well...just hinting at a horrible choice...do know you well...but your light-hearted write leaves me in no doubt that you would never do this. Thanks also for your comments on my poem...cheers H. Huberta Van Akkeren March 10, 2014 at 9:21 PM Sorry the above should read do not know you well...sorry thinking faster than typing...

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2014 at 5:45 PM cool title on this revenge tale!! Hey, I may be wrong, but double check her rules. I was thinking it could be only two stanzas!!?

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2014 at 3:14 PM - Good for the contest, Sara - Well done ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 9, 2014 at 1:09 PM you seethe with much justification, sara... an intense write that speaks of liberation.. love this!.. huggs

Paul Callus March 9, 2014 at 12:47 PM Should I classify it as black humour! very good write. // paul ps. gl re contest

Russell Sivey March 9, 2014 at 7:10 AM Wow I really enjoyed reading this cleverly written poem here this morning! I understand that this poem is unlike what you usually write, but it is very powerful and very effective! This is a terrific poem here my friend! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!