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Quiet Triumph

In broken silence, a single breath rises-- flickers of hope through the cracks, light spills where shadows clench vigor birthed from the stillness, victory whispered softly.

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/10/2025 4:15:00 PM

perfect title for this gem of a poem! I especially liked 'vigor birthed from the stillness.' You're right, victory comes with silence and knowing when not to speak. Well done & beautiful poem, hugs, Sara

Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 8:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara! sending hugs right back!

Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/10/2025 9:06:00 AM

Amazing write my friend!:)

Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 11:58:00 AM

Thank you.

Tom Woody

Date: 8/10/2025 5:09:00 AM

Agree with Vic below. Integrity often finds its triumph in silence and calmness. Nice write Ro

Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 6:56:00 AM

Thanks Tom!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/10/2025 3:12:00 AM

Soft and easy does it, my friend. I loved the tone of your poem.

Rowena Velasco
Date: 8/10/2025 3:18:00 AM

Thank you, my friend! I’m so glad the tone spoke to you—it means a lot coming from you. Soft and easy truly can carry the deepest feelings. Appreciate your support!