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QUIET BREATH

QUIET BREATH ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Peace is not a fragile thing but roots that grip the stone and hold. It grows in cracks where war left scars deep-set like patient moss unfolds. No flag, no hymn, just quiet breath that fills the hollowed chest at dawn. It waits in dust where soldier’s footprints fade to find the shape of calm worn smooth. It knows the weight of silence when all words have burned away like chaff. peace remains like frost on sleeping leaves— a gift the night bestows and keeps.
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Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 8:43 PM
Beautiful. Another FAVE ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:39 PM
thank you -- humbly grateful for the fave...appreciate you
Hind Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 4:25 PM
A Breathtaking piece, Sara
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:40 PM
thank you sincerely, dear Paige. hugs, Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2025 at 10:55 AM
That peace that comes after the puddles are cleansed, after the screams have been ceased, after..after.. well done!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 25, 2025 at 5:39 PM
awww, thank you for your enthusiastic and supportive comments, Kim...hugs, Sara
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