Quiet

it is all quiet
the western front sleeps
white noises ebb...my  mind rests
dreams are of cotton candy clouds
the sky no longer bleeds
the moon glows, the stars shine
the western front sleeps
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Bien Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 10:43 AM
thank you for reading Brian...JB
Strand Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Your 4th line is a one line monoku JB like the kyrielle flavour as well Rgds Brian
Mitchell Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 8:01 AM
This brings a sense of peacefulness. It soothes and relaxes me. Thanks! : )
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