quiet
upon quiet morn
when the stillness still lingers....
watchman crow caws
first only faint whimpering sounds
then full fledge warning billows
Robert Collum's style of writing a Haiku transferred over to Tanka poetry form.
3 words/5 words/3 words/5/5 words.
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