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Quiet

interrupted by catastrophic silence quiet…do you hear it solitude-bells ring, index on a bibliothec’s lips a gesture with no point butterfly-sand shut up in the hourglass 3/31/2023 Contest: Writing Challenge - 'Q' Words Sponsor: Constance LaFrance Theme: quiet Syllables: 4/7/6/7/7/6/6/4

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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/4/2023 6:45:00 AM
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Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. Enjoy your win/day with blessings................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2023 6:00:00 AM
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Thank you!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 4/3/2023 6:54:00 AM
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What fun Kim! Love the last two lines. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2023 5:59:00 AM
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Thank you, Linda!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2023 4:03:00 AM
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Kim, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2023 5:59:00 AM
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Thank you!
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Date: 4/2/2023 10:27:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win in the Contest, Kim Rodrigues Nice short poem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/5/2023 5:59:00 AM
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TY
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/1/2023 8:45:00 PM
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'butterfly sand shut-up in the hourglass' still has me smiling away, Kim. :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2023 5:24:00 PM
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Yay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/1/2023 6:43:00 AM
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Silence too speaks--well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/2/2023 6:11:00 PM
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Thank you, Vijay!
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Fin Chuuk
Date: 3/31/2023 10:20:00 PM
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I wouldn’t mind a daily solitude. :) Very nicely done Kim. You’re always quick with all these contests. Amazing.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/1/2023 4:23:00 AM
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I don’t know about that…but thank you, Fin!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 3/31/2023 2:20:00 PM
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We all need some "quiet" from time to time. I enjoyed your write. Have a blessed day/weekend.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2023 3:36:00 PM
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Thank you, Paula! Happy Weekend! Blessings!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/31/2023 12:23:00 PM
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- Creative thoughts in silence, Kim - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2023 3:36:00 PM
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Thank you, my friend! Hugs ~ Kim
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/31/2023 12:18:00 PM
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So enigmatic in its silence - the hourglass! Wonderful entry! Best wishes for the contest! Blessings! Alleluia approaches!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/31/2023 3:36:00 PM
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God bless you, Sam! Thank you!

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