Quiet

quiet has a sound... unlike cacophonous snore ...intense solitude 4/23/2018

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/24/2018 2:27:00 PM

Can't help think of the song "Sounds of Silence" when reading your excellent haiku, Kim. Very nice! Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn!

Mark Morris

Date: 4/24/2018 1:54:00 PM

Wow.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 2:44:00 PM

Thanks, Mark!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/24/2018 3:55:00 AM

Excellent haiku. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/24/2018 6:55:00 AM

Thank you, Ravi!

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 4/23/2018 9:04:00 PM

I've a few poems on the subject of silence, liking it to a rare bird. We are flooded and drowning in every conceivable noise today. Only the dead have escaped it. Thanks for reading my poem on my dog Bonzo, Kim. Best to you. / M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2018 9:08:00 PM

Thank you, Maurice!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/23/2018 8:51:00 PM

I love silence, it teaches us so much,

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2018 9:09:00 PM

Yes it does! Thank you Pixie Dust!

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/23/2018 8:10:00 PM

Lovely haiku ... Can we name a colour for the sound ... say light purple ...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/23/2018 8:40:00 PM

Perhaps, my creative friend!