Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Quiescent

The quiescent oaks shiver in the cold
Their fugacious leaves blown away in the breeze
February will you bring me closer to spring bold
If anyway possible would you please

Now the susurration of winter's wind
So different from sighing of the pines
How I long for angular sun's warmth, my friend
For time in the sun, how I have pined

There's pale gray wool flung across the sky 
A cold white shawl draped upon the lawn
Before the sun rises to warm by and by
When sun illuminates the crack of dawn

Chilled daffodils tender shoots peek through the earth
Seeking the sun's early light and warm touch
Once more to refresh the bulbs' life with mirth
Invite early insects to tickle its trumpet and such  

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Sotto Poet February 14, 2024 at 9:55 AM Back with heartfelt congratulations on your well deserved contest win with your lovely poem dear Sara Sara Kendrick February 14, 2024 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Lasaad for going the extra mile and saying congrats. Sara K

Robert Sidwell February 14, 2024 at 9:53 AM I loved the beauty of the flow and feel from the imagery and pattern of this piece. Congratulations on your win!! Sara Kendrick February 14, 2024 at 12:43 PM I appreciate the visit with congrats, Robert. Your time spent here made my day. Sara K

Constance La France February 14, 2024 at 5:21 AM Sara, excellent writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love the image too, hugs, Constance Sara Kendrick February 14, 2024 at 9:16 AM Constance, I appreciate you dropping by with congrats and the kind review of my work. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith February 13, 2024 at 1:19 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Quiescent" write/picture. I love pretty daffodils. Enjoy your day with your win.......................... Sara Kendrick February 13, 2024 at 2:22 PM Thank you, Paula, for dropping by to let me know I placed and offer congrats. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar February 2, 2024 at 3:38 AM We see a lot of daffodils in November and they are supposed to be protected. Trust children to cut them off to sell them. Sara Kendrick February 13, 2024 at 2:24 PM Victor, sad that children have to cut them probably to help their family be able to survive. Daffodils are beautiful and offer such hope of warmer weather especially here where I live. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Daniel Henry Rodgers February 1, 2024 at 5:42 PM Dear Sara, Your poem beautifully captures the transition from winter's chill to the promise of spring's warmth. The imagery of nature awakening from its slumber is so clear and evocative. It's like a secret conversation with the changing seasons. Keep embracing the beauty of each moment! Beautiful Poem! - Blessings, Daniel Sara Kendrick February 2, 2024 at 2:55 AM Thank you for the kind review of my work and the blessings. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Bill Baker February 1, 2024 at 5:17 PM Well rhymed poem of hope, Sara. Spring is coming! The imagery is pleasing while I'm sitting here freezing. LOL Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Bill Baker February 2, 2024 at 11:42 PM What state do you live in? In you don't mine saying. You can soup mail if you don't want it out there. :-) Bill Sara Kendrick February 2, 2024 at 2:54 AM It does help to think spring, Bill. It was chilly here to me yesterday but we got up to 62. Sara K

Sam Kauffman February 1, 2024 at 1:42 PM Wonderful, unique word usage, Sara! Images as fresh as a spring rainfall! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of refreshment and light to you! Sara Kendrick February 2, 2024 at 2:50 AM Thank you, Sam, for the blessings of refreshment and light. I feel renewed already. Sara K

Ink Empress February 1, 2024 at 12:03 PM This is absolutely stunning dear sara, your choice of words and also rhymes, creating such a captivating cadence that I absolutely can resonate to . I love especially the lines “ Now the susurration of winter's wind So different from sighing of the pines How I long for angular sun's warmth, my friend“ i can feel the longing and depth of your words strongly. Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light today and always Sara Kendrick February 1, 2024 at 12:13 PM IE, More like spring today but started off at 31 up to 62 now. So, a nice day in winter that has the warmth of spring during the day. Your visits add a special touch to my page. Sara K

Silent One February 1, 2024 at 11:37 AM Your pen really captures the essence of longing and hope, inviting the reader to embrace the beauty of transition and the promise of new beginnings that accompany the changing seasons. It is a gentle reminder that even in the coldest of winters, the warmth of spring is never far away. Sara Kendrick February 1, 2024 at 11:50 AM SO, it is like the essence of hope to come into spring, in the fall a kind of relief from the heat and humidity all a newness that is refreshing. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar February 1, 2024 at 8:30 AM The susurration of winter's wind: what a lovely poem you wrote. Well done. Sara Kendrick February 1, 2024 at 11:48 AM Thank you, Victor. Winds through the windchimes some nights very restful. Your visit is uplifting. Sara K

Sotto Poet February 1, 2024 at 8:05 AM You have exhibited an astounding talent by crafting words that inspire and captivate readers, Sara. Your ability to create vivid imagery leaves readers in awe. Numerous lines within your work resonated with me, and the overall flow of your writing was exceptionally smooth. Sara Kendrick February 1, 2024 at 8:14 AM Your comments are uplifting. I am delighted that you found something that you could relate to personally. Thank you for dropping by. Sara K