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Quiescent

hedgehog hibernates
snuggled under leaf blanket
snowflakes gently fall

5,7,5 as per HMS

''Q'' Contest, NEW ONLY Poetry Contest

sponsored by Constance La France

09/29/21

autumnnaturehaiku

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Sam Kauffman

October 9, 2021 at 9:26 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan with this cozy haiku! I love hedgehogs and this is a delightful snapshot of these appealing critters! Cozy hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

October 5, 2021 at 1:05 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun Haiku story/write and picture. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day..............

Joseph May

October 5, 2021 at 11:52 AM

Congrats on your win Jan..

Line Gauthier

October 5, 2021 at 10:32 AM

awww ~ what a delightful brevity. Congrats on your winning poem, Jan.

Constance La France

October 5, 2021 at 9:04 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this heartwarming poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Christuraj Alex

October 4, 2021 at 9:07 PM

Coming back to congratulate you. Good Work!

Mark Koplin

October 4, 2021 at 7:48 AM

Nice imagery, love the hedgehog!

Caren Krutsinger

October 1, 2021 at 12:09 PM

Ahhhhh so pretty, so fall-like, spectacular.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

October 1, 2021 at 6:07 AM

A lovely nature poem

Sara Kendrick

October 1, 2021 at 3:31 AM

I like your Haiku. As far as I know we do not have hedgehogs around here. I wonder how they make in with no more covering than those leaves. Reads like a good work to me. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Rico Leffanta

September 30, 2021 at 11:21 AM

Thank you for proving they purposely choose to have a cold nose! Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico

Christuraj Alex

September 30, 2021 at 9:39 AM

Wow! Hibernation of hedgehogs! How beautifully said in few words! Great imagery!

Delice Arleen Skelly

September 30, 2021 at 7:34 AM

This is lovely thought on hedgehogs..Delice

Victor Buhagiar

September 30, 2021 at 5:29 AM

Well written haiku and a worth poem for the contest. Best for a win. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose

September 30, 2021 at 4:18 AM

Oh that gentle touch I love so much Jan, even when humor is set aside, you still write NICE < thankyou for sharing, be well, heal and love xo

Jan Allison

October 1, 2021 at 5:36 PM

thanks Vie I do write the odd decent poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

September 30, 2021 at 1:18 AM

So sweet, Jan:) nice little haiku:)

Jan Allison

October 1, 2021 at 5:35 PM

thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

September 30, 2021 at 1:12 AM

He sure looks snuggly. Cute little Haiku, Jan.

Jan Allison

October 1, 2021 at 5:30 PM

Isn't he cute! hugs jan xx

Brian Strand

September 30, 2021 at 12:59 AM

A 'natural' hiku Jan

Jan Allison

October 1, 2021 at 5:29 PM

I see so many poems labelled as hiku but from the subject matter I wonder if they are. thanks for dropping by i do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx