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hedgehog hibernates snuggled under leaf blanket snowflakes gently fall 5,7,5 as per HMS ''Q'' Contest, NEW ONLY Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France 09/29/21

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/9/2021 9:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jan with this cozy haiku! I love hedgehogs and this is a delightful snapshot of these appealing critters! Cozy hugs!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/5/2021 1:05:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a fun Haiku story/write and picture. Few words with much said. Have a blessed day..............

Joseph May

Date: 10/5/2021 11:52:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jan..

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/5/2021 10:32:00 AM

awww ~ what a delightful brevity. Congrats on your winning poem, Jan.

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 9:04:00 AM

Jan, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this heartwarming poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Christuraj Alex

Date: 10/4/2021 9:07:00 PM

Coming back to congratulate you. Good Work!

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/4/2021 7:48:00 AM

Nice imagery, love the hedgehog!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/1/2021 12:09:00 PM

Ahhhhh so pretty, so fall-like, spectacular.

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 10/1/2021 6:07:00 AM

A lovely nature poem

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/1/2021 3:31:00 AM

I like your Haiku. As far as I know we do not have hedgehogs around here. I wonder how they make in with no more covering than those leaves. Reads like a good work to me. Thanks for your visit. Sara

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/30/2021 11:21:00 AM

Thank you for proving they purposely choose to have a cold nose! Enjoyed! Aloha! Rico

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/30/2021 9:39:00 AM

Wow! Hibernation of hedgehogs! How beautifully said in few words! Great imagery!

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/30/2021 7:34:00 AM

This is lovely thought on hedgehogs..Delice

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/30/2021 5:29:00 AM

Well written haiku and a worth poem for the contest. Best for a win. Hugs.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/30/2021 4:18:00 AM

Oh that gentle touch I love so much Jan, even when humor is set aside, you still write NICE < thankyou for sharing, be well, heal and love xo

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2021 5:36:00 PM

thanks Vie I do write the odd decent poem!:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/30/2021 1:18:00 AM

So sweet, Jan:) nice little haiku:)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2021 5:35:00 PM

thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/30/2021 1:12:00 AM

He sure looks snuggly. Cute little Haiku, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2021 5:30:00 PM

Isn't he cute! hugs jan xx

Brian Strand

Date: 9/30/2021 12:59:00 AM

A 'natural' hiku Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 10/1/2021 5:29:00 PM

I see so many poems labelled as hiku but from the subject matter I wonder if they are. thanks for dropping by i do appreciate your support:-) hugs Jan xx