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Quiescence

Burning effulgent golden daystar - mirrored, reflected Drawing up the facsimile of faith and luminescence Trees oscillate and dance together with the rhythmic gust of breeze Air - blowing and puffing, zephyr cooled by the brook Turfs overran the land with exultation and furore Fondling, gripping, and cuddling the headstream Odoratas - ample-petaled,whitish-pink flower lilies Bobbing in the reverberating melody of undulated waves Nymphalid - gliding, vagabonding with elegance Bragging its chromatic colorful ala above the stream current Cervids drinking serenely with potable crystalline water Salmons plunging, swimming for life and subsistence Sedimentary rocks carried away gently, instinctively Indigenous sanctuary - obscure, raw Undisturbed habitat of existence Factual heaven - midst of the woodland Home of soothing silence - rivulet of my daydream. JUNE 01, 2011

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:35:00 AM
intricate piece, jun... brightest cheers to you for a real sweel win... proud to be pinoy! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, jun-jun,
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:48:00 AM
Amazing write here jun-jun...congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:54:00 PM
simply gorgeous, jun! big congrats and proud to be pinoy! :) hugggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:40:00 PM
Congrats jun-jun on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this exciting flowing entry luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Jun-Jun with your win in my contest with this lovely poem, I am very impressed with your use of words~
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:35:00 PM
blew my mind..beautiful piece of art with lot of imagination..thanks for the comment on my poem,we Filipinos are truly creative and imaginative hehe..hope you win this "write me a rippling stream" contest..god bless to you and best of luck -- love charmane
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:34:00 PM
What a fine sanctuary you have created with apt images, jun-jun
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:56:00 AM
Great, beautiful and meaningful. So smooth with much imagination here and many things to think over....thanks so much, I wish I could write like you do, Jun-Jun
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:26:00 AM
thank you..really appreciated...just new in this art,..not well-versed...hehehe...lolz.. ---junjun
Date: 6/1/2011 8:13:00 AM
very very interesting write full of words which are new to me [I love that!] such an idyllic place! Light & Love
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/1/2011 10:28:00 AM
i've done so many processes to create this poem...searching in dictionaries and thesauruses ,...so tired but think worth it,...hope will win... junjun
Date: 6/1/2011 8:13:00 AM
very very interesting write full of words which are new to me [I love that!] such an idyllic place! Light & Love
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Jun-Jun Villanueva
Date: 6/2/2011 9:17:00 PM
thanks for the compliment

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