Quiescence

Burning effulgent golden daystar - mirrored, reflected
Drawing up the facsimile of faith and luminescence
Trees oscillate and dance together with the rhythmic gust of breeze
Air - blowing and puffing, zephyr cooled by the brook
Turfs overran the land with exultation and furore
Fondling, gripping, and cuddling the headstream
Odoratas - ample-petaled,whitish-pink flower lilies
Bobbing in the reverberating melody of undulated waves
Nymphalid - gliding, vagabonding with elegance
Bragging its chromatic colorful ala above the stream current
Cervids drinking serenely with potable crystalline water
Salmons plunging, swimming for life and subsistence
Sedimentary rocks carried away gently, instinctively
Indigenous sanctuary - obscure, raw
Undisturbed habitat of existence
Factual heaven - midst of the woodland
Home of soothing silence - rivulet of my daydream.





                                          
                                                    JUNE 01, 2011

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/9/2011 9:44:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:35:00 AM
intricate piece, jun... brightest cheers to you for a real sweel win... proud to be pinoy! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, jun-jun,
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:48:00 AM
Amazing write here jun-jun...congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:54:00 PM
simply gorgeous, jun! big congrats and proud to be pinoy! :) hugggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:40:00 PM
Congrats jun-jun on your wonderful win in Constance's contest with this exciting flowing entry luv.. enjoy...
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Date: 6/5/2011 7:39:00 PM
Congratulations Jun-Jun with your win in my contest with this lovely poem, I am very impressed with your use of words~
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Date: 6/1/2011 7:35:00 PM
blew my mind..beautiful piece of art with lot of imagination..thanks for the comment on my poem,we Filipinos are truly creative and imaginative hehe..hope you win this "write me a rippling stream" contest..god bless to you and best of luck -- love charmane
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:34:00 PM
What a fine sanctuary you have created with apt images, jun-jun
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Date: 6/1/2011 8:56:00 AM
Great, beautiful and meaningful. So smooth with much imagination here and many things to think over....thanks so much, I wish I could write like you do, Jun-Jun
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:26:00 AM
thank you..really appreciated...just new in this art,..not well-versed...hehehe...lolz.. ---junjun
Date: 6/1/2011 8:13:00 AM
very very interesting write full of words which are new to me [I love that!] such an idyllic place! Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:28:00 AM
i've done so many processes to create this poem...searching in dictionaries and thesauruses ,...so tired but think worth it,...hope will win... junjun
Date: 6/1/2011 8:13:00 AM
very very interesting write full of words which are new to me [I love that!] such an idyllic place! Light & Love
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:17:00 PM
thanks for the compliment
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