L Milton Hankins Poet Limerick

Quick On the Draw

I recall a young fellow from Quebec
Who was forever saying “What the heck?”
He was quick on the draw,
This was his only flaw
But his deprived wife was a total wreck.

written September 21, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly September 22, 2021 at 2:16 AM Very, very funny...Delice L Milton Hankins September 22, 2021 at 8:00 AM Thanks so much, Delice. So glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger September 21, 2021 at 9:22 PM I like the end rhymes Hank; wonderfully thought-out and executed! L Milton Hankins September 22, 2021 at 8:00 AM Thanks, Caren.

Lindsay Laurie September 21, 2021 at 6:42 PM Hello Milton ... the perfect answer for everything, although in time it will wear thin - thank you Milton - Lindsay L Milton Hankins September 21, 2021 at 7:55 PM I think you are absolutely correct, Lindsay. Thanks for your comment.

Tom Cunningham September 21, 2021 at 11:20 AM Should have paid her more attention than standing in front of the mirror lol. Tom L Milton Hankins September 21, 2021 at 1:20 PM Probably so, Tom. Thanks for your read and comment.