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Quick On the Draw

I recall a young fellow from Quebec Who was forever saying “What the heck?” He was quick on the draw, This was his only flaw But his deprived wife was a total wreck. written September 21, 2021

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/22/2021 2:16:00 AM

Very, very funny...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/22/2021 8:00:00 AM

Thanks so much, Delice. So glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/21/2021 9:22:00 PM

I like the end rhymes Hank; wonderfully thought-out and executed!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/22/2021 8:00:00 AM

Thanks, Caren.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/21/2021 6:42:00 PM

Hello Milton ... the perfect answer for everything, although in time it will wear thin - thank you Milton - Lindsay

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/21/2021 7:55:00 PM

I think you are absolutely correct, Lindsay. Thanks for your comment.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/21/2021 11:20:00 AM

Should have paid her more attention than standing in front of the mirror lol. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/21/2021 1:20:00 PM

Probably so, Tom. Thanks for your read and comment.