Questionku 5 - 8

POEM 5

You see my pain
That impacts my life
Can you keep my secret?

POEM 6

Fire or Water
Only one can I choose
Which one will save my life?

POEM 7

Can’t live with you
Can’t live without you
What is our middle ground?

POEM 8

Each step I take
A clue to it’s path
What if there was no clue?


Modified Haiku's

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/1/2013 1:57:00 PM
Shaz , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. PD
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Date: 12/19/2012 8:14:00 AM
Hi Shaz, read my Anwerku.
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Date: 12/15/2012 2:24:00 AM
Great questions..I can relate to #7..Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem...Hugs, Holly
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Date: 12/8/2012 9:20:00 PM
Fantastic Shaz!!! I love stopping by and reading your work. Big fan of your words and your art!
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Date: 12/8/2012 6:43:00 AM
Interesting questions that you pose...Enjoyed reading this morn...Sara
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:03:00 PM
Hi Sara.....Thank you for stopping by :)
Date: 12/3/2012 12:49:00 PM
Yes indeed...You are very good at these. :o) I feel I have the answer to the fire and water.Lol.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:05:00 PM
Oh do you......lol...- Shaz
Date: 12/2/2012 7:52:00 AM
great write Shaz....winning wishes
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:07:00 PM
It was gr8 to try them out. I enjoyed the 'Questionku' thanks for stopping by Joseph - Shaz :)
Date: 12/2/2012 7:41:00 AM
You have mastered this form.. well and written... always with a smile Michael
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:06:00 PM
Hey Michael - Thank you - Shaz :)
Date: 12/2/2012 7:09:00 AM
Here they come lined up .... they are excellent all together Shaz. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:08:00 PM
hehe....thanks Anne Lise - yeh i started with the individual, but agree they are better together - xo Shaz
Date: 12/2/2012 6:50:00 AM
Another very good set!Enjoyed.
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Shaz Cheesman
Date: 12/8/2012 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Kash - glad you enjoyed. - Shaz :)
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