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Questioned Reason

I searched for you in the night's dimmest light
Found quiet loneliness stirring in the dark
The moon's passing covered by clouds in flight
As it slowly traveled its nightly arc
This companion listened but never heard
The words pouring from pained lips of sorrow
And questioned reasons became unassured
Still lost in the moon's light and tomorrow
And what help does darkness bring that surrounds?
When thunder rolls in distant skies alone
And hazy eyes stumble across the ground
In the dim scattered light the moon disowns
To have found you before your departure
And capture again the days in time's sand
We looked into the stone of love's sculpture
And found the tool marks of opposing hands

Could I have given better understanding
Could you have given love less demanding

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/4/2014 1:14:00 AM
Frederic, a question with a reasonable question to follow... An hour glass away, deep imagery.... xox...Linda
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/4/2014 8:55:00 AM
thank you Linda, I hope you stay
Date: 1/2/2014 12:39:00 PM
An awesome craft of a love poem! Brilliant phrasing and rhyme scheme! A tinge of regret n complaint of luv is noticed. Kudos! I hope u review my latest poem too.
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/4/2014 8:56:00 AM
thank you for the kindness of your answer
Date: 12/31/2013 1:53:00 PM
A marvelous poem !! Always the questions for understanding Love. I think we make it demanding when it should be a gift given, my thoughts anyway. I really enjoyed this !!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 1/1/2014 11:49:00 AM
it is a gift if the need for love is not greater than the gift of love given, thank you for your kind answer Debra

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