Question

I have a question for you.......... Is there anyway that you can be with just me Is there anyway that you can prove it to me I can only hope that in time I will see that you were the one ment for me I know that it is hard right now and feels like we will never make it through but guess what are love will guide us through I know I love you more each day but the thing is do you still feel the same way I know that we have had are ups and downs but I hope you always know I will always be around there are some things that are harder to get though but it is not just me it is also the the things that you do so I say this one more time I have a question for you.............

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/24/2011 9:51:00 AM

I must tell you there have been so many diverse poems shared here at PoetrySoup yesterday and this morning that I am just now being able to read. Each one is a treasure to the poet who wrote it. It is a pleasure to me to be able to read them. I am so happy yours was among the ones I have read today Tia. Love, Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 3/24/2011 6:20:00 AM

indeed relationships must be worked at, a nice read, some of the split lines were a distraction from the verse.