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Quest Continues

An autumn leaf while floating on a stream asks, "Where does freedom galore?" An adrift bubble while riding on a wave asks, "Would I reach the shore?" The gentle breeze while touching young leaves asks, "When I would go to stop?" A gliding cloud while roaming all around asks, "When I would reach the top?" The autumn sky unfolding its beauty says, "Hi!" and asks," Where all the questions go?" The stars - all those shine ask winking their eyes, "Why do you want to know?" (C) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/25/2015 5:39:00 AM

An excellent first attempt. Off a bit on syllable count. I'll use your third to demonstrate. "a gliding cloud" line one no capital and four syllables. "journeys across sky" five syllables no capital letter at start. "will it's tears touch parched ground" third line no capital and six syllables. I hope this helps. Thanks for giving it a try, much appreciated.