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31.01.2024

Anne-Lise Andresen
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- Quagmire, Quest, Quiescent -
  Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

3st place in the contest

- Quest -

                                    When the blinds fall away
                                      unveiling of the cocoon
                                             A light flutter
                                            dust sprinkles
                                         Careful wing beats
                                         a slight movement
                                     An artistic creative force
                                         fleeting, transitory
                                          and fragmentary
                                        Soul prophetic power
                                   even by its insignificant place
                                             in the cosmos
                                          Purple lilac aroma
                                       butterfly transformation
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Kendrick Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 9:42 AM
Very impressive winning work. Way to go.Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Congratulations. Sara K
La France Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 5:46 AM
Anne-Lise, wonderful writing and congratulations on your win in my contest, love your image, hugs, Constance
Goldsmith Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Hugs... Enjoy your day with your win....................
Morrison Avatar
February 2, 2024 at 2:10 PM
I know you have not heard from me in a while, but i am back. This piece was beautifully written. Anne-Lise Your work is stunning as always.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:23 AM
Your poem can easily be described as an artistic creative force. So beautifully written. Hugs.
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 8:52 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs
Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 3:18 PM
Good luck on the contest. I think this would be my favourite one to be chosen. Lovely and thoughtful. A jewel to be saved. Thank you for sharing your wisdom all the time. My dear Anne have the best eveningxxxFav+ for me
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:24 AM
- Thank you very much for your fave, Maria :) - hugs
M  Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 1:11 PM
So soft and gentle are your lovely words Sunshine….beautiful!! Debx
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:23 AM
- Thank you very much, Deb :) - hugs
Narain Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:09 AM
Stunning way of Butterfly transformation. Nice poem. GL in contest.
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:23 AM
- Thank you very much, Jay :) - hugs
One Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 9:51 AM
I love how your poem offers a poignant meditation on transformation, beauty, and the interconnectedness of all living beings. Through its rich imagery and evocative language, the poem invites readers to contemplate the profound significance of even the smallest moments of beauty and renewal in the natural world...
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:23 AM
- Thank you very much, S.O. :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 9:18 AM
What a wonderful write/great ending/lovely picture. I really enjoyed reading this one. Good Luck in the contest. We both did this one. Hugs... Have a wonderful day writing away.........
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:23 AM
- Thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs
Roper Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 7:07 AM
Wow, my friend so stunning. Love the photo. hugs and many blessings to you
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:22 AM
- Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs
Pandit Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 6:40 AM
An artistic creative force-- fleeting, transitory-- and fragmentary--fabulous writing, Anne-Lise. A winner for me!
Andresen Avatar
February 1, 2024 at 2:22 AM
- Thank you very much, Vijay :) - hugs
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