Query

Cracks teacher's query. Blue eyed girl smiles at me; bliss bells ring in my heart. ______________________ Date - 20th September 2016

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Date: 11/6/2016 5:42:00 PM

Beautiful win!! Congrats Augustus, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)

Date: 11/6/2016 11:33:00 AM

awhh, your last line is so adorable, augustus... congrats on your lustrous win..huggs

Augustus Black
Date: 11/6/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thank you so much. Huggs.

Date: 11/5/2016 5:45:00 PM

Short and very well done. Ideas expressed in three lines. Wow. Congratulations.

Augustus Black
Date: 11/6/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thank you.

Date: 11/5/2016 5:41:00 PM

Congratulations!

Augustus Black
Date: 11/6/2016 6:27:00 AM

Thank you.

Date: 11/5/2016 4:47:00 PM

Agustus congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~

Augustus Black
Date: 11/6/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thank you.

Date: 11/5/2016 3:35:00 PM

A 7 for your winning entry, Augustus. Janice

Augustus Black
Date: 11/6/2016 6:26:00 AM

Thank you.

Date: 9/20/2016 7:13:00 PM

what a cute final line, bell rang in my heart. That is really sweet.

Date: 9/20/2016 4:38:00 PM

A very deep senryu, Augastus. LINDA

Augustus Black
Date: 9/20/2016 8:50:00 PM

Thanks a lot Linda