Query

Cracks teacher's query.
Blue eyed girl smiles at me; bliss 
bells ring in my heart.
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Date - 20th September 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kimathi Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 5:42 PM
Beautiful win!! Congrats Augustus, for your WIN in the contest!! ;-)
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 11:33 AM
awhh, your last line is so adorable, augustus... congrats on your lustrous win..huggs
Black Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Thank you so much. Huggs.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Short and very well done. Ideas expressed in three lines. Wow. Congratulations.
Black Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Thank you.
Sands Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Congratulations!
Black Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:27 AM
Thank you.
La France Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 4:47 PM
Agustus congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write ~
Black Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thank you.
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2016 at 3:35 PM
A 7 for your winning entry, Augustus. Janice
Black Avatar
November 6, 2016 at 6:26 AM
Thank you.
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:13 PM
what a cute final line, bell rang in my heart. That is really sweet.
A   Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:38 PM
A very deep senryu, Augastus. LINDA
Black Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 8:50 PM
Thanks a lot Linda
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