Quenching the Fire

A thirst quenching kiss
a caress too much
warm waves of the pleasure
arouse surrendering body
with the slightest
teasing touch.

Lost in the moment
lost in you
discovering places yet anew
Passion increases
as we dance and weave
through the flames
increasing the pleasure
until two worlds collide
the hurt delights
our wild passion and abandon
quenched and tamed
The journey over
we lay in each others arms
whispering I love you
and each others name.

Peter Dome.copyright.29013. Dec.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 12/22/2013 6:52:00 AM
I like this very passionate poem. Imagery good and every word reflects the theme. Best wishes, Linda x
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/22/2013 7:24:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda. Always great to her from you.. glad you enjoyed it. take good care. Best wishes. Pete.
Date: 12/18/2013 3:14:00 PM
GREAT title for this poem which exactly is quenching the fire!! AWesome!
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/20/2013 1:31:00 PM
Thank you so much Andrea. Always a great pleasure to hear from you. Don'y get much fire theses days alas. take good care. best wishes. Pete.
Date: 12/18/2013 4:28:00 AM
- Peter, a beautiful poem - always nice to read what you write! - Thanks for all the beautiful poems you have shared with me this year! - I wish you a beautiful and peaceful Christmas! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Peter Dome
Date: 12/20/2013 1:33:00 PM
Anne Lise. I can never thank you enough for your thoughtfulness and kindness. thank you. wishing you the best always. take care, Pete.
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