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Quenched With Infatuation

manic fixation
     revealing love’s devotion
           raptured by your touch
  never knew thirst until you
                  quenched with infatuation


Tanka in 5 7 5 7 7 Poetry Contest
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The Poet Doctor
July 6, 2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 7/14/2018 11:54:00 PM

manic fixation... thirst quenched. An excellent tanka and use of the two words. A winner, I say. :)

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/7/2018 11:03:00 AM

Very nice. I especially liked “raptured by your touch”.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 11:12:00 PM

This is a lovely, sweetly-sensual write... I love it, Laura!