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August.2.2023
Writing Challenge'Q' Words Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Constance La France
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Quench

"I quest for a return to the unappeased joys of my sweet past"- By Poet

Quench my thirst to get back to my past When tame pigeons of joy nested on my eaves And I could hear their crooning With the sweetness of love outpouring When innocent instincts ruled my heart And I ran after every call from the woods or bush Mesmerized by the whistles of the oriole and the thrush Quench my thirst to get back to my past When every rainbow and every peacock feather Ignited curiosity in me as a child And coloured my imagination wild When, with friends, I sat in the mango grove Plucking and savouring the ripe juicy mangoes Careful not to let the pulp drip down our mouths Quench my thirst to get back to my past When we strolled along the sandy strands Watching the wild waves' fray And cooled by the kiss of spray When we had watched at night A hundred fireflies dancing around the *neem Wondering if they were stars fallen from heaven’s seam Quench my thirst to get back to my past When, like breeze, we ran over the meadows Looking for the bleating lamb Singing in chorus, ‘Mary had a little lamb' As memories come clamouring down, Like the lash of cascading rain, I can't but make a quest to return to the days of my past.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Back with congratulations on this winning work in Constance's contest. Way to go. Sara
May Avatar
August 4, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Wonderful write on memories of childhood and nature's beauty, Congrats on your win
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 2:45 PM
“Quench my thirst to get back to my past” love this repeating line of your poem, Dear Valsa. Your poem is incredibly touching, and by the repetition of this line, you have doubled the effect on the reader’s mind. Descriptions of the childhood memories are so real! Congratulations on your top win. Thanks to the sponsors - for them, we have the opportunity to read powerful poems. Love ~ Mala
Goldsmith Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 2:06 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/quote. Great picture. I enjoyed reading it. Have a lovely/great day.............
Narain Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Nice recollections, Sure winner,Valsa.
Tor Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 10:14 AM
Valsa what a lovely wish. How often I have quenched to go back in time what I would have done differently, what I would have said, what career path I would have taken differently. Thank you for taking me there and remiscing back to my early years in life. Blessings your way...
Kendrick Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 2:46 AM
Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I like the word quench. We all have a thirst for something that needs quenching. Sara
Daniel Avatar
August 2, 2023 at 1:44 AM
Precious memories to revisit, Valsa:)
M  Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 11:25 PM
Simply beautiful Valsa…. Special memories indeed! Debx
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