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Queen's Forest

In Queen's forest,
squirrels thrill with their tails,
sweet fruits compete for bite.
There I shall holiday
and refill me with hunting game.




30 syls.
Name: Kayod5.
Contest title: Somewhere.
Date :10.1.15

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Robert Lawrence

Date: 3/28/2015 12:23:00 PM

Great write, keep it up.

James Fraser

Date: 1/16/2015 2:07:00 PM

The Squirrels hunt is a joy to watch, nice one Kayod5, congrats, James :)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/16/2015 2:10:00 PM

Exactly James,thank you my friend...huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/15/2015 10:40:00 PM

thank you for the reply..PD

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/15/2015 1:55:00 AM

Wonderful work Kayode! Trust hunting is just a poetic expression my friend! Congrats on fine win!

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/15/2015 4:33:00 AM

Thank you Upma,hunting game can be interesting Dr....huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/14/2015 9:31:00 PM

Kayod5, Congratulations on your win. ~LINDA~

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/14/2015 10:44:00 PM

Thank you and God bless Linda...huggs

Archana Garg

Date: 1/14/2015 10:39:00 AM

I would also like to be in your Queen's forest. AMAZING IMAGINATION. Congrats dear... Archana

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/14/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thank you my Archana...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/14/2015 10:19:00 AM

squirrels thrill with their tails hahahaha Kayod5. Great image. Congrats on win. Love,. take care ---rajat

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/14/2015 11:06:00 AM

Thank you Rajat and how is life my friend? Take care...huggs

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 1/13/2015 10:40:00 PM

I love your somewhere, Kayod. Reads like a fairy tale...congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 11:05:00 PM

Thank you Rhonda...huggs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/13/2015 9:46:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, congrats on he win, Kayod5

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 11:05:00 PM

Immense thanks Dr. Ram...huggs

Eve Roper

Date: 1/13/2015 8:54:00 PM

Kayod5, I love your canvas, it's beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Blessing dear friend

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 11:04:00 PM

Immense thanks Eve...huggs

Paul Callus

Date: 1/13/2015 5:52:00 PM

Hi Kayode! I missed reading this lovely poem before...good thing I now found it on the winners' list! Congratulations....your medal collection is increasing fast:) Mine failed to make it to the finals!! Goodnight and hugs. // paul

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 6:02:00 PM

Thank you Paul,it has been long I featured on winner's list ,this has just managed to squeeze itself in through the back door. A bit pain that you missed this but there is always other day. Good night my Great Paul... respect and huggs.

Casarah Nance

Date: 1/13/2015 5:46:00 PM

Nice! I would so go there with ya! Grats on your win :)

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 5:51:00 PM

Super,that will be nice ; a total hunting game.Thanks for the visit Casarah...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2015 5:01:00 PM

hey, first time I am seeing this one and I see congrats below. SWEET!!! Big congrats for the win.

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 5:15:00 PM

Thank you very much Andrea...huggs

Jan Allison

Date: 1/13/2015 2:49:00 PM

Many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 5:14:00 PM

Thank you Jan...huggs

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/13/2015 2:10:00 PM

Kayod5, congratulations on your win! Hugs, Sandra

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/13/2015 2:11:00 PM

Thank you Sandra for your message...huggs

Gary Bateman

Date: 1/10/2015 11:59:00 AM

Hello KAYOD5, A quite lively verse here indeed. The imagery is very interesting (for me) and tugs at my English/Irish roots with the way you've articulated it!! Very Well-Done, and best of luck in the contest. A "7" from me and a FAV!! Best Always und ein schoenes Wochenende!! Gary

Kayod5 Kayode
Date: 1/10/2015 1:57:00 PM

Hello Gary, thank you for your visit and this beautiful comment. I am happy you love it,danke dir und ein schönes Wochenende bei dir auch,mach's gut.