Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Queen of Spades

You come along to disrupt my life, after many silent years
Plunge in with your manipulation and lies, playing on fears
What gives you the right, to turn my life upside-down?
While keeping truth from me, as always, wearing your crown
    --- Like a Queen of Spades in a card game of Hearts ---
         --- How far will you go, ripping lives apart? ---


Heidi Sands

9/8/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr. September 12, 2017 at 1:29 PM Wow! That's some strong truth potion this fabulous poem gives, Heidi. Powerful write all day long. Braveheart poetry. Love and joy always. Heidi Sands September 12, 2017 at 1:51 PM Thank you so much Freddie. I appreciate your comment ! :)

Susan Ashley September 9, 2017 at 3:01 PM An awesome and self-empowering write Heidi! Every line is amazing but your Queen of Spades line is aces! Loved your strong voice here :) Heidi Sands September 9, 2017 at 3:05 PM Thanks so much Susan! I appreciate your visit and positive feedback on this one. :)

Vijay Pandit September 8, 2017 at 5:44 PM Queen of spade can't succeed--queen of heart always wins! Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 6:18 PM Nice to see your kind and special message, Vijay :)

Dale Gregory Cozart September 8, 2017 at 3:24 PM Your 'queen of spades in a game of hearts' reference if very, very clever. Good write indeed. Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 4:01 PM Thank you so much Dale :)

Russell Sivey September 8, 2017 at 3:06 PM I can sense your emotions throughout this write! I surely loved reading your magnificent poem here my friend! What a heartfelt piece, an amazing poem, Great work!! Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 3:12 PM Thank you for being so kind to me and offering positive feedback on my poetry Russell. I appreciate it very much! :)

Joseph May September 8, 2017 at 2:19 PM A queen without heart.. powerful write Heidi Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 2:19 PM Thank you Joseph :)

Lin Lane September 8, 2017 at 2:06 PM I had no trouble comprehending your meaning, Heidi. A costly card if not played, as is one who the card portrays. Great write. Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 2:19 PM Thank you Lin. Yes, that is correct :)

Tim Smith September 8, 2017 at 1:58 PM Your message came across perfectly Heidi...great use of metaphor Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 1:58 PM Thank you Tim :)

Luis Estable September 8, 2017 at 1:46 PM This lacks good clarification of the person in question. The rhyme is not bad, but the content can be improved. Thanks, Luis Estable Heidi Sands September 8, 2017 at 1:55 PM Thanks Luis.