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Queen of Spades

You come along to disrupt my life, after many silent years Plunge in with your manipulation and lies, playing on fears What gives you the right, to turn my life upside-down? While keeping truth from me, as always, wearing your crown --- Like a Queen of Spades in a card game of Hearts --- --- How far will you go, ripping lives apart? --- Heidi Sands 9/8/17

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 9/12/2017 1:29:00 PM

Wow! That's some strong truth potion this fabulous poem gives, Heidi. Powerful write all day long. Braveheart poetry. Love and joy always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/12/2017 1:51:00 PM

Thank you so much Freddie. I appreciate your comment ! :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/9/2017 3:01:00 PM

An awesome and self-empowering write Heidi! Every line is amazing but your Queen of Spades line is aces! Loved your strong voice here :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/9/2017 3:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan! I appreciate your visit and positive feedback on this one. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/8/2017 5:44:00 PM

Queen of spade can't succeed--queen of heart always wins!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2017 6:18:00 PM

Nice to see your kind and special message, Vijay :)

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 9/8/2017 3:24:00 PM

Your 'queen of spades in a game of hearts' reference if very, very clever. Good write indeed.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thank you so much Dale :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/8/2017 3:06:00 PM

I can sense your emotions throughout this write! I surely loved reading your magnificent poem here my friend! What a heartfelt piece, an amazing poem, Great work!!

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2017 3:12:00 PM

Thank you for being so kind to me and offering positive feedback on my poetry Russell. I appreciate it very much! :)