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Queen of Hearts

Toward the heavens the moon ever climbs Love claims her majestic throne among the stars I stand before her mystic shrine, in throe of heart Grant mine love’s decree and return his desire unto me Much hope attends mine wish; I plead of thee Oh queen of hearts tend mine wounded soul In mine solitude I weep and upon moonlit paths I shall wander haunted by his memory

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/18/2011 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Poem From Your First 100 On P S" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2011 5:58:00 PM

Congrats Lori on first place win with this rare beauty poetry luv..

Honestly J.T.

Date: 11/17/2011 12:12:00 PM

Congrats on 1st place and a good write. - JH

John Freeman

Date: 11/17/2011 11:43:00 AM

A beautiful Queen, Lori, congrats on a perfect one. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley

Date: 11/17/2011 8:36:00 AM

Well penned Lori. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 8/7/2011 11:20:00 PM

Love your queen of hearts in the stars Lori, you have a wonderful imagination to pull this off so well.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/5/2011 9:38:00 PM

wow, another one that has that classic feel to it!

Judy Ball

Date: 8/4/2011 7:15:00 PM

Very nice indeed Lori. A fine write. One small typo last line. Should be wander instead of wonder, right? No biggie. Just trying to help. God Bless, JB

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/4/2011 1:21:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Lori. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/3/2011 9:47:00 PM

deeply touching lines Lori.. very emotional piece luv.. touch of romanticism..