Lori Lucas Mcclure Poet Free verse

Queen of Hearts

Toward the heavens the moon ever climbs
         Love claims her majestic throne among the stars
           I stand before her mystic shrine, in throe of heart
       Grant mine love’s decree and return his desire unto me
              Much hope attends mine wish; I plead of thee
                 Oh queen of hearts tend mine wounded soul
               In mine solitude I weep and upon moonlit paths 
                        I shall wander haunted by his memory

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 18, 2011 at 10:37 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Any Poem From Your First 100 On P S" contest Lori. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 17, 2011 at 5:58 PM Congrats Lori on first place win with this rare beauty poetry luv..

Honestly J.T. November 17, 2011 at 12:12 PM Congrats on 1st place and a good write. - JH

John Freeman November 17, 2011 at 11:43 AM A beautiful Queen, Lori, congrats on a perfect one. Agape, Moses

Bob Quigley November 17, 2011 at 8:36 AM Well penned Lori. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest

Elizabeth Wesley August 7, 2011 at 11:20 PM Love your queen of hearts in the stars Lori, you have a wonderful imagination to pull this off so well.

Andrea Dietrich August 5, 2011 at 9:38 PM wow, another one that has that classic feel to it!

Judy Ball August 4, 2011 at 7:15 PM Very nice indeed Lori. A fine write. One small typo last line. Should be wander instead of wonder, right? No biggie. Just trying to help. God Bless, JB

Carol Sunshine Brown August 4, 2011 at 1:21 PM Enjoyed reading your creative poetry today Lori. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will return to read more as time allows so keep your pen flowing. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 3, 2011 at 9:47 PM deeply touching lines Lori.. very emotional piece luv.. touch of romanticism..