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Queen of Halloween

Queen of Halloween

Queen of Halloween
ghosts dance on her graveyard scene
hear the banshee scream

10/16/17

Halloween Senryu
Sponsored by: Laura Loo 

Copyright © Janis Medders Tobechi | Year Posted 2017

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James Inman Date: 10/24/2017 7:15:00 AM Janis, wonderful flow and beautifully descriptive. Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/24/2017 10:12:00 PM Thanks, James.

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/24/2017 7:11:00 AM The entrance of the Queen! Good one! Congrats! <3 Kim Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/24/2017 10:13:00 PM Thanks and blessings, Janis.

Beautiful Scars Date: 10/24/2017 5:30:00 AM very creepy and I love the rhyme! thank you and congrats :) Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/24/2017 10:13:00 PM Good contest to be in. Thanks for the placement.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/23/2017 3:26:00 PM The banshee added in was a very nice touch, Janis. I was not sure it was a banshee in that picture, but with that red hair, methinks you got it right! Login to Reply Janis Medders Tobechi Date: 10/24/2017 10:14:00 PM Thanks Andrea.

Charlie Smith Date: 10/23/2017 10:53:00 AM Congratulations Janis... Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/23/2017 7:16:00 AM Back with congratulations :) xomo! Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/17/2017 11:05:00 AM I love your take on this picture Halloween theme, Janis. The banshee scream should draw the sponsor's attention:) Regards // paul Login to Reply

Darren White Date: 10/17/2017 3:07:00 AM Lovely senryu Janis, there is rhyme in there! Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 10/16/2017 9:08:00 PM A wonderful Senryu Janis. Very vivid imagery and I love the use of the word 'banshee'! Enjoyed and good luck in the contest! Login to Reply

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/16/2017 8:43:00 PM Sweet Senryu! I love Banshee anything :) my best to you for the contest Login to Reply