Quartz Glass Spaces

I love you without surmising 'why',
your passion sets pon dusky distances
betwixt & 'midst quartz glass spaces,
where scented phases astir moon glow
and impassioned fireside involvement
madly erupt above obscure air castles,
beyond a swept away briny rendezvous
of crystallized darkly essential marrow,
like wildflowers penchant for Spring
blooming 'tween summoned fiery March
snowdrifts' lashing bout ignitable flurries
amongst wind's orgasmic undressing,
farthermost indulgent sundown piques
regaling its worth with naught but those
magnificent moments in timely conception,
whence endearment yearns to be evermore
 

Inspired by Pablo Neruda - - Sonnet Xvii
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 16, 2016 at 4:15 PM
I love Pablo Neruda..The poet Ruben O..Introduced me to him.and I fell in love with his poetry....This is a fantastic write Paloma..Gonna fave.it.
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November 16, 2016 at 4:17 PM
You introduced me to his poetry, I have to visit him again soon, trying to catch up from being away. Thanks Charmaine, means a lot from someone who's poetry I very much admire.
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