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quarks and acorns

People’ve asked me how Peter and I got together..
They ask, "Where'd you meet him?" “Was he drunk?”
“Did you sneak up on him?” and “Couldn't he get away?"

It was a Saturday morning in March 2022, I was a lowly Yale sophomore, at the acorn, my favorite Yale coffee shop, head down, working on my iPad, trying to create a story-poem about recent happenings - time traveling in my mind you might say - back to things seen, said and done. When I heard an “Ahem.” 

Looking up. I saw a skinny, twenty-something man, about 6'1", with jet-black uncombed hair, dressed ill-fittingly in drab browns and tans. 
He was standing before my table with a satchel over one shoulder and a large coffee in his left hand. 
“May I join you?” He asked.

I looked around, there was only one other empty seat available - at the far back. 
“Sure,” I said, and noticing my bookbag was in the empty chair - I mumbled, “Sorry,” moving it next to me on the floor. 

He nodded and began to move. “Peter,“ he said, in introduction. 
“Anais,” I replied distractedly - my focus had returned to my poem.

After a second, as he pulled out his chair, he asked, “What are you writing?”
“Poetry,” I answered, not looking up.

“So, something imaginary,” he said, which sounded condescending and irritating.
'Who’s THIS guy?" I thought, and looking up, I asked, “Are you a student?”
“Doctoral candidate - applied physics,” he said, both off-handedly and cutting directly to the chase.

“Things too small to see,” I said. “Imaginary things,” I growled in revenge.

His mouth quirked - the suggestion of a smile dancing at the corners of his lips. He finished his coffee after a while and left. 
I saw him on campus several times after that - It got to where we’d nod.

Then one thundering, rainy, dark-gray Saturday morning he was back. “Ahem,” he said, and before I could even look up, he asked, 
“May I join you?”

I looked up, and around - there were plenty of seats. 
”We can be imaginary friends,” he added. 
I smiled and nodded ‘ok.’
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A song for this:
Cannock Chase by Labi Siffre
Who Knows What Love Is? by Strawberry Switchblade
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Rodgers Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 6:06 PM
Dear Anais, your poem feels like a place where the imagined and the real quietly trade masks. Plato’s cave comes to mind, but your poem goes further: it suggests that what we call “imaginary” may be one of the deepest ways we meet each other. “We can be imaginary friends” is a beautiful, unsettling line. Blessings, Daniel.
Vionet Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 7:20 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for the nuanced comment =]
Fallica Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 4:35 AM
How charming. To me anyway. Nice piece. Interesting pix. / "We hung-out for months before we started anything romantic." Months!? I would've thought he was smart. What took youse? ;-) / <3
Vionet Avatar
April 11, 2026 at 7:03 AM
I thought he was a little out of my league, so I was willing to let him make a move - if he was going to. I'm using some 'less of a glam shot' pics these days. =]
Conn Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 1:52 PM
He was surfing and YOU sensed blood. * You left out the drooling parts. =]
Vionet Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 6:43 PM
Oh, yeah. I'm a shark =] We hung-out for months before we started anything romantic. THEN there were goo-goo eyes. =]
Conn Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 2:46 PM
... And the googly eyes.
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