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Quantum Nature A quantum nature rules the sky, Burning wavelengths at the noon, Climbing south to reach up high, Down in the west to setting tunes. Evening is a glowing sight, Festival of shadows long, Golden tones of solar light, Hues of sunset strong. Indigo time comes around. Just a little while it stays. Kindly dusting streets and ground, Leaves us and goes on its way. Midnight’s song's mysterious so. New day's nighttime is slate blue. Oh, what spectrum soon to know, Particles of dawn brand new. Quantum nature is real pure, Relying on laws day by day, Showing us truly that it's sure To tell us our world’s still OK. 9/3/16 CONTEST 254 Brian Strand

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Date: 3/9/2018 3:35:00 PM
Expertly written poem, Sian. Wish it coulda went on from U to Z. Even still, it was a very creative poem. Your skillful pen handles science matters even ... a science nerd like me is impressed. Mighty fine poetry. Love and smiles always.
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Date: 9/16/2016 10:42:00 PM
Nicely written!
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Date: 9/16/2016 2:35:00 PM
Succinct and awesome Janis! Congratulations on your second place win! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/16/2016 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Connie.
Date: 9/16/2016 1:47:00 PM
Janis, I really like your quantum theme and the way you addressed it in your well-constructed poem. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/16/2016 3:52:00 PM
Thanks, Sandra and hugubac.
Date: 9/16/2016 11:57:00 AM
Janis, Congrats on your 2nd place win in my alphabet soup contest! The imagery was beautiful and your lines were tight and flowing! Great work! Blessings!
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Janis Thompson
Date: 9/16/2016 3:53:00 PM
Kim, you have such wonderful contests. The challenges are great.
Date: 9/4/2016 8:26:00 AM
Quantum beauty in the lovely poem ...
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Date: 9/4/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks, Probir, I always love for you to visit.

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