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Poem written for and submitted to 'Love Language of Yuletide" poetry contest, Nette Onclaud, sponsor, December 15, 2025.

QUALITY TIME

I thought of you stranded on that shelf, 
your plastic hands curled around empty air. 

I woke dad; he didn’t say just a doll.
put boots over bare feet, keys jangling. 

truck's headlights cut through frozen dark~ 
yellow eyes leading us to silent school.

dad lifted me on his shoulders. I’m here! 
he wrenched window open; cold rushed in;
you awoke; we brought you home!
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Goldsmith Avatar
December 26, 2025 at 10:27 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful QUALITY TIME" write again. Have A Very Blessed/Happy New Year 2026 writing away...................
Gauthier Avatar
December 17, 2025 at 1:34 PM
lovely poem, Sara ~ charming
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:04 PM
thank you, Line.
Wolf Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 8:16 PM
What a hero dad is. Nice to see. Nice to read. Thanks for giving us something nice in the world today, Sara. Keep bringing the love and the light. ~ Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 21, 2025 at 4:04 PM
you're so right...my dad was and is my hero. Glad you appreciated having something nice to read. thanks for encouraging me to continue on my poetic path :-) grateful
Goldsmith Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 12:17 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun/wonderful  "QUALITY TIME" write. Cute Doll Picture... "Good Luck" I also did "QUALITY TIME."  Have a fun day writing away............
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 5:15 PM
thanks, dear Paula...this was indeed a fun write, hugs
DiMino Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 4:00 AM
Very beautiful. I have given many dolls in my life...and yours is a Darling Christmas Story. Blessings.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 7:31 AM
thank you, Joe, for visiting and for your gracious comments.
Achara Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 7:36 PM
Lovely.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 7:31 AM
many thanks, Chetta. Merry Christmas.
Hind Avatar
December 15, 2025 at 7:27 PM
Is this a memory? A gift of a doll? It's very endearing if it is....if I interpretted it right. <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 16, 2025 at 7:32 AM
you're right; it's a memory of a Christmas event that actually happened. My dad rescued my doll from my kindergarten classroom; I'd accidentally left her there before Xmas break.
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