Quaking Aspen

We are the high altitude sentinels.
Our small groves freckle the high plains.
We keep to ourselves, mostly
upon the snow burdened peaks
where our ashen trunks blend
and our barren branches cling
to icy white glitter.

As the breath of winter ebbs
we watch the crystal spring run-off
growing ever greener with envy 
of how it races down the hill; babbling.
We whisper this to one another
in the crisp mountain air, solemn
as we keep watch.

From our station on the precipice
we behold fully the majestic sun
revering at dusk how it paints the sky.
In the failing warmth of autumn, 
we offer in turn, our own reflection of
magnificent golden sunset skies 
in our shimmering yellow foliage. 

We keep company with pines,
firs, spruces, and other prickly sorts.
Conifers aren’t social, which suits us
as we keep mostly to ourselves.
Sentinels must remain vigilant, after all,
watchful for approaching danger. 
We quake from paranoia, probably.
 
Our bark is pale, above all, for fear.
We’ve seen your kind before.
Your kind we watch most carefully.
If you look close, you will see
from our thousand dark eyes
we always look closely back at you.

Are you dangerous?

08/21/15
Submission for contest: Trees Personified
Hosted by: Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

*I loved the aspens when my family would go camping in the high Uinta mountain range in Utah. They are beautiful and they can grow at such high elevation (above 10,000 ft) it's really amazing.
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Ober Avatar
September 14, 2015 at 11:23 AM
Wow, this is phenomenal personification. You clearly have a vivid imagination, which you seamlessly combine with your own experience. Your descriptions are very eloquent. Congrats on your win in Charlotte's contest!
A  Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:05 PM
The Grahamburglar, Congratulations on your "Trees Personified" win.... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 11:36 PM
Very wonderful write Graham! Congrats on awesome win!
Roper Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 8:26 PM
Wonderful description and flowing poem. Congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Puddifoot Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 5:54 PM
i loved this one! a touch of paranoia in those quaking aspens, and that last stanza was so strong, rather sinister with the watchful black eyes...i think this is the first poem i've read of yours, and what an introduction to your work! i hope you will enter more of my contests with well written pieces like this one - congrats on your win!
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Absolutely delightful many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:34 PM
That's "written"!!
Leiser Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 10:33 PM
What a beautiful description of the quaking aspen! Very well rotten with great imagery! Good luck in the contest:)
Gibson Avatar
August 22, 2015 at 5:59 PM
Well, Grahamburgler, (does that mean you steal kidnap Teddy Grahams?) This poem is just spectacular. Loved it!!
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