Quadruple Haiku-God Needs Our Presence

Wherever life breathes,
love beautifies everything
He has created! 

Waterfalls nourish
what's lies underneath as ponds
hold their fresh water!

It's a Paradise
we have lost since their first sin...
let us take it back!

God needs our presence,
to walk with Him and obey...
we can be holy!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/11/2011 2:59:00 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your win in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Glenna
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:25:00 PM
Good one..Enjoyed this one..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 7/9/2011 10:36:00 PM
swinging cheers to you for the amazing award, andrew!! :) huggs
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Date: 7/9/2011 9:20:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! so proud to share the placement with you....smile..*-*junjun
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Date: 7/9/2011 3:36:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on a fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv..
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Date: 7/9/2011 12:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrew in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2011 11:18:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on your win with this wonderful write...enjoyed.
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Date: 7/9/2011 9:32:00 AM
Andrew, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/9/2011 9:19:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Andrew
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Date: 7/3/2011 7:21:00 AM
let us take it back for sure Andrew.. excellent words of Haiku to express the message of faith and luv and hope .. impressive piece my friend full of spiritual expressions.. for life ..happy 4th to celebrate our freedom ...in Christ..luv..
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Date: 7/3/2011 12:19:00 AM
WOW! a great quadruple haiku...congrats for this great work... ^_^ junjun
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