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Quadro-The Window of Youthful Dreams

A golden spark gleams
in aging blue eyes, faded gray.
Rain lulls her to sleep
through the window of youthful dreams.



01/12/17
Contest: Quadro
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/17/2017 7:03:00 PM

Wow, this touched me. Beautiful! Congratulations, Arlene, on your win with this fine Quadro.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/17/2017 12:52:00 PM

Terrific Arlene, a most deserving win, congratulations...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/16/2017 3:04:00 AM

Great imagery and symbolism, Arlene:) congratulations on top win:)

Rob Carmack

Date: 1/15/2017 10:44:00 PM

This is one of my favorites in the contest. Congrats Arlene.

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/15/2017 9:40:00 PM

Beautifully expressed. Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/15/2017 3:27:00 PM

I love the symbolism of the window, Arlene. a beautiful poem and win. Congrats.

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/16/2017 2:30:00 PM

Thank you dear friend.. Still taking lessons from you on thinking out of the box and not being so literal in my interpretation..

Jan Allison

Date: 1/15/2017 3:09:00 PM

Very beautiful lines Arlene congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 1/15/2017 2:44:00 PM

Beautifully penned...Congrats on your win

Mark Martin

Date: 1/15/2017 12:59:00 PM

We're all young at heart. Great poem! Congrats on your win Arlene! :-)

Paul Callus

Date: 1/15/2017 11:57:00 AM

Sun, a golden spark...sky and blue eyes...a metaphorical window of dreams....a combination for a winning entry. Congratulations on your top win, Arlene. Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/15/2017 11:28:00 AM

arlene, the whole mellow imagery is the thing that stood out for me !... sweets congrats on your finest ranking and thanks for being part of this contest.. huggs

Arlene Smith
Date: 1/16/2017 2:26:00 PM

It is an honor to be placed anywhere amongst you all... Thank you for the generous placement in your contest, dear poet..