Pyro

Burning, burning, burning bright Flames dance ‘round and cast their light Growing, growing, growing tall They cast dark shadows on the wall Burning, burning, burning strong Nothing can withstand for long Growing, growing, growing tall I hold the match that started it all Burning, burning, burning bright The fire brings the only light

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Stephanie Whitley

Date: 1/18/2009 9:58:00 PM

I liked it. Its a cool poem. Different. It made me think of when I was younger and I first figured out how to light a match, and I used to do it all the time...I was a pyro. :) Peace n Blessings ~Oreo

Christopher Higgins

Date: 1/18/2009 5:57:00 PM

This is an interesting write. Love the repitition in the piece. Good work.