Pygmalion and Galatea

I am love’s kiss eternal
leaning upon
the lips of loyalty 
O artisan of relentless flare
I validate every verse you vent 
   vehemently breathing
through the sighing silence ~
venerating this sculpted ivory skin
stirred and awakened
by your inherent intuition
charmingly echoing
amidst the faithful fingers
    of your passionate soul;
a carved creation
chiseled in chivalry
draped in the desire
of a destiny designed
engraved away
from the ruthless rays
        of the sinister sun…

I am awake…
no longer a marble metaphor
but alive and entranced
within the shadow
of your affectionate allegiance 
listening to the
aroma of this ache
tracing this toned silhouette
resembling the translucent
textures of the moon ~
deaf to the twilight
chimes of the sky,
as the clay of life
nevermore comprehends
this ethereal vow,
this undeniable flame
softened through
the stone-warm touch of truth ~
as your creative choreography
of calligraphy
caresses every curve
embracing imperfect perfection
like I am
the undressed dream
you have forever wrapped
       in porcelain patience
like angel-feathered Venus
with blushing wings
of gothic grace ~
scattered seashells
adorned where
thoughts of infinity tiptoe
through Aphrodite’s galaxies
beneath flickers of reveries…

and I belong to no other
but the paradise
within your familiar hands
holding the hope
that dwells within
the heavens of my heart’s pulse
like a forsaken talisman ~
the kismet rose...thornless,
         only you were
                        fated to keep ~

the embossed emblem
   of love
           even time itself
                             cannot defy 

*Inspired by the artwork "
Pygmalion and Galatea by Jean-Léon Gérôme"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 6:45 PM
I knew this was a winner. Congrats 👏
Bordner Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 1:42 PM
What heart is not a half sculpted hero until worked further by the flame chiseled kiss of loyal love Poetess...this poem, the template of love ballad making...J.A.B.
Sharma  Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:58 AM
I just am so impressed by your artistic words always and how you describe things in such a profound as well as eloquent manner, just makes my soul feel so much, even words are too less to describe.. sigh.. love the use of mythology here as always! U do nail it everytime! Everything with venus, seashells, gothic grace,porcelain patience ahhhh I'm dying gosh.. so good! Sending you light and so much love always fairy goddess This is absolutely a Favourite ~
Sharma  Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:55 AM
Ah love that reaches beyond time.. this just touched my heart, even thawed it.. so beautiful and you've completely extracted the essence of the art I must say.. as timeless as it is, your words themselves took me to another world. Although, i really wish there were such a galaxy of purity and sincerity.. "as the clay of life nevermore comprehends this ethereal vow, this undeniable flame softened through the stone-warm touch of truth" ahh this is absolutely soul-touching, goshh and that line "the heavens of my heart’s pulse like a forsaken talisman ~ the kismet rose...thornless, only you were fated to keep" my favvvvv
Onpaper Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:32 AM
a carved creation chiseled in chivalry draped in the desire of a destiny designed.. ooo the alliterationssss!!! Love it !! engraved away from the ruthless rays of the sinister sun… mmmmmm powerful rays aee.. listening to the aroma of this ache tracing this toned silhouette.. aaa I listen ae !! Looking also the silhouette!!! Very curvilisiouse! ;p.. your creative choreography of calligraphy caresses every curve embracing imperfect perfection.. the beauty of these lines papi… absolutely breathtaking!!! like I am the undressed dream.. wait!!! Wat u mean “ like “ no “ like “ are YOU ARE !!!! dress is for the weak!!! U magically piece of heaven!!! U be undressed ae ! You have captured the spirit the essence of the art piece magnificently papi!! Absolutely divine !
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:34 AM
“ dress is for the weak” hahahah omg papi im rolling!!! U are hilarious! Dying……
Hind Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 1:11 AM
just beautiful, Ink, always is - I like being introduced to new art too
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 11:52 PM
References to mythology makes this a magical poem and you are at your usual best with the use of imagery and sound. What a talent you have for alliteration . I miss you. Was waiting for an email from you but will send you one soon!
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:13 AM
I must have missed it my sweet soul aunt! Been traveling ~ I will scroll through my email and find your email to respond to’ You know you are my fave long time :D
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 11:08 PM
Hey boo ive told u in my forever friend post what gems i like so u need to go seeeee ( o ) ( o ) LOLOLOLOL I need emojis thats meant to be eyes LOL looks more like boob's LMAO hugsss <3;
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:11 AM
Hahaha I was in the middle of a meeting when I just scrolled through my phone, and saw this comment and almost burst in tears laughing hahahah oh yea boo!! Emojis are necessary befoe everything looks wrong :/ :0 Amethysts are lovely … but just like you I wear moonstones alot!! I just bought new pair of moonstone earrings couple of days ago! I will show you on instagram soon! I love gems and crystals! And I love wearing my huge blue topaz ring cus it reminds me of the ocean. And you already Know I am a mermaid! :? ) honestly My attempts at emojis are low quality! Anyway! Hahah thank you for making me laugh BOO
Cunningham Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 9:20 PM
You have such a great talent for this form IE and you've inspired many on here too. Hope your week is going well. Tom
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:28 AM
Thank you so muxh, the queen of ekphrasis is a friend of mine ~ one of my faves, she is the reason I started liking this form and I dont think anyone can really beat her. I am always grateful for your kindness and selfless support. Sending you light always
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 6:43 PM
Again your Ink has found new highs to expression.
Empress Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 2:33 AM
You have been a very warm and kind presence on soup, dear Alison, thank you for your generous support. Sending you light always ~
DiMino Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 6:06 PM
"this ethereal vow, this undeniable flame softened through the stone-warm touch of truth ~ " -- Wow, quite stirring verse! "the undressed dream you have forever wrapped in porcelain patience" -- Amazing, deeply moving. "the embossed emblem of love even time itself cannot defy " -- Indeed. Splendid interpretation!
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:10 PM
Wow Ink another masterpiece of art with ink painting the picture to the painting. Your writing from heart n soul inspires me and feel the depth of ever word from your heart n soul.. Ink you are a sheer genius my forever friend ~ sprinkles of fairy coloured sparkling dust on your page hugzzzz <3 <3
Gibbons Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 10:57 PM
My fav gems got more than one dear ink lol amethyst when I moved I went to say bye to the girl owned the Chinese she hugged me said Dorothy I'm gonna miss your colourful smile. Said a gift for u to keep stress away n protect you. A massive amethyst rock love colours I hold it in my hands often. I also love moonstone as I'm passionate dreamer ~ angel aura and tigers eye ~ sheer determination to go for my dreams hugzzzz friend <3 <3
Empress Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:12 PM
Awwn you are such a lovely gem! Now you must tell me what is your fave gem! Haha Sending you light always ~
Liguori Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:04 PM
I just bought myself a block of ivory. ;) ;)
Empress Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 2:11 PM
As long as you dont lose your marbles for sure dear Robert .. lol. The story behind this is so very inspiring! Check out youtube! Sending you light always
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