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Put Them Out of Sight Now

Lay down your old ink pen... Rise from the table... Push back your chair. Gather them all up... Put them out of sight now... Place them safely in the cupboard Bare. Wrapped in stiff brown paper, Strung tightly together With thin white string; Turn over the smooth copper key; Resign yourself, reluctantly, To quietly leave them there. Left all alone to slowly gather fluffy Purple dust Like decorative porcelain plates, Whose bright pastoral scenes stand Timelessly paused, Hanging up alongside deserted stairs That arrive, unannounced, on a forlorn Landing of silent and closeted doors. The stanzas unawares of prevailing Moods, Scorned like long flowing ballroom Gowns That once swept elegantly across Polished floors:- Let them too dream contently Of far distant times, Lovingly locked away, Draped remotely over rattling hangers In Rosewood Regency cabinet sets Of upright hanging drawers. For the abandoned words Are no longer held in any great Regard Of their long forgotten gentlemen: Magnanimous in grandest victories... Ennobled in celebrated defeat. Those who sit trapped in dark oils Against gloomy backdrops of oaken Paneling, Lean hunting dogs lying faithfully At the heels of leather booted feet; Just old bones Securely interned under knitted sods Nurturing moist soils - Commended souls released and raised High above all earthly toils. Legends inscribed upon black marble slabs Proudly trumpet the everlasting glory Of "Gloria in excelsis deo"; Awaiting Rapture... Contented in Heavenly sleep; Whilst, exalting, stone cherubims shed Cold stone tears, raise stone hands, And, with much dramatic piety... Openly weep. Thus the poems endure but remain unread Of bloody battlefields ploughed under The furrow By the hardy ploughs honest moition; The rich brown earth enveloping over The torn Battle-Standard and dutiful solider... All crushed, splintered - violently Broken! Penned by poets that counted the Limbless and the dead; And heroic and desperate acts:- Most of which went unspoken; Where, When coursing across un-hedged Fields Of shattered conflict And failing, reinforced disrepair: The clattering of dulled tin horns - That once sounded on a more Fulsome and purer air! But, alas, Their poetry is already forsaken - Deviled by the tongues of unworthy fools! Held in judgement before a contemptuous Jury Whose objections so oddly perverse. Condemning those Romantic "heretics", Who, uncompromisingly enthused... That all poetic meter and foot, In which they did so ably converse, Should co-exist side by side - Honouring the sublimely flowing lines Of each and every beautifully constructed Verse!

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Date: 1/10/2018 12:37:00 PM
First, thank you for all of your commentary on my pieces. You left me smiling. You call my work magnificent but this is EXCEPTIONAL. I have so many questions to ask. I find solace in knowing that my words will live on. Words and ideas and connecting words to ideas - it all just oozes out (of anyone brave and daring enough to write). This is the very definition of immortality. John, this piece is just.. wow.. you forced me to consider the inconsiderable, to conceive the inconceivable.
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John Fleming
Date: 1/14/2018 2:47:00 AM
Thank you, Chante. I confess I rather like this poem...but, like a lot of my earlier poems, it does need a bit of "tidying up"; that is what writing is all about I suppose...we learn and improve as we go along. Thank you for visiting and commenting -- it is always very much appreciated! I will catch up with you and your poems very soon, Chante. My very warmest regards as always. :) john
Date: 9/11/2017 11:12:00 AM
I believe once words are freed from the mind on paper or air they never cease to roam. Sometimes in sometimes out they always find hearts to come home to thus they are immoral. John Fleming your thoughts belong to the world. Now what I have just written may sound a tetch over exaggerated but it is what I truly believe.
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:04:00 PM
Patricia, as per-usual, we are in complete concord! I could not have expressed your sentiment any more perfectly - beautifully espoused! The written word, just like the spoken word, once made, truly is immortal! Patricia, all my very warmest regards...and, of course, my very best wishes as always. Your good friend! :) john
Date: 8/20/2016 6:19:00 AM
That is, indeed, Cona - A most comforting thought! My very best regards to you...And my warmest wishes. Your friend always. :) john
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Date: 8/19/2016 3:13:00 AM
The poems will not die, John Fleming. They may lie dormant for a time, but they are even then being sung by Angels.
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Date: 8/20/2016 6:19:00 AM
That is, indeed, Cona - A most comforting thought! My very best regards to you...And my warmest wishes. Your friend always. :) john
Date: 12/24/2015 4:30:00 PM
John I can't explain why but this is probably my favourite of all the pieces of yours I have read. Perhaps because it speaks to me directly, hums a tune in my ears that is pleasing. I think though most of all the subject and how you have attacked it is so brilliantly original. Also for me I could not add or remove a single word. A Big Huge Fav. I love your poetry John and I thank you for lifting my spirit this lonely day. All the best, Armand!
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Date: 12/25/2015 5:58:00 AM
Armand...You are most welcome my good friend. I too live a single and lonely life. I have never married and have never fathered any children. That is to my detriment...But it is just the ways things turned out to be. Maybe it is for the better...Who knows...God perhaps. I think that is why I write. Before I move on I have things I would wish to say....For better or worse. You have my respect and consideration, Armand...I believe you are more than worthy of it. A very merry Christmas, and may God guide and protect you in the New Year. My very, very best! :) john
Date: 11/11/2015 11:18:00 AM
What an amazing work of poetry John ... I loved reading this poem!Keep up the great work -Love Ettie
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Date: 11/12/2015 5:44:00 AM
Hi, Ettie. How very nice to make your acquaintance - Proud to be sure! Thanks for stopping-by and leaving such positive feedback for me; It is very much appreciated! My best regards! :) john
Date: 11/6/2015 1:11:00 PM
CLEARLY A SEVEN...such a treat in that I'm so fond of rhyme. I'm always saying that Poetry in not unlike a fruitcake: both are used for doorstops. I love how you show that any art, once valued, can be easily lost in the tides of time. What does it take to turn a popular poet (or painting) into something passé? Intriguing read. This was a real sculpture out of marble & an ode to all poets!
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:58:00 PM
On the Rhyme: two peas in a pod I'm afraid and with everything in Free or Blank Verse. I force myself to write in other genre but, it's the song I love!
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Edlynn - You are most kind! You have given me high praise indeed - Much obliged! I too adore rhyming poetry. Mind you - I always was a champion of lost causes...Lol! My very warmest regards, Edlynn! :) john
Date: 10/25/2015 3:40:00 AM
""trapped in dark oils"...great John!....and thanks for the comment...Peter.
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Date: 10/25/2015 12:03:00 PM
Good to hear from you again, Peter! Hope all is well for you. Glad you enjoyed the read; it was an old one of mine. I think I may well add a little more to it in the near future. Many thanks and...Best regards! :) john
Date: 10/13/2015 4:35:00 AM
Oh, that IS good! Julia, with my kind regards. :)
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Date: 10/13/2015 12:40:00 PM
You are most welcome, Julia. An old one of mine - revamped. Many thanks...Cheers! :) john
Date: 10/2/2015 10:44:00 PM
My friend, I made a double take when I saw the title. As always, you write with a purpose. As for the "abandoned words", I will always come back to appreciate the product of your talent, old or new. hugs!
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John Fleming
Date: 10/3/2015 5:39:00 PM
Hello, Kim. It is so very nice to see you visiting me once again. I hold your comments in particularly high regard! You are very kind. I really do hope you are fully recovered now...and fit and healthy once more. Your friend always. :) john

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