Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

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Put the Past Aside - the Dark Side of the Moon

Bitter, the taste of tears on your color less cheeks, breathe, 
reality on the run hurts worse than the insane damage of
any words thrown in hatred; let my crooning eclipse you,
insolate you, like a halo on an angel. “Speak to me of us,
nevermind, the money and the great gig in the sky or them."


B itter, THE taste of tears on your COLOR less cheeks, BREATHE, 
R eality ON THE RUN hurts worse than the insane DAMAGE of
A NY words thrown in hatred, let my crooning ECLIPSE YOU,
I nsolate you, LIKE a halo on an angel “SPEAK TO ME of US.
N evermind, the MONEY AND the GREAT GIG IN THE SKY or THEM."

Speak to Me/ Breathe, On the Run, Time, The Great Gig in the Sky, 
Money, Us and Them, Any Color You Like, Brain Damage, Eclipse


9/11/15

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John Loving Iii October 11, 2015 at 4:12 PM Be the color Breath our on the run Damage any Eclipse you I like speak to me us In money and great gig in the sky them. Could'nt figure it out Debbie Guzzi October 11, 2015 at 5:04 PM The contest judge gave all the names of songs on 1 ablum & said use those words and write a poem. The first few lines are my verse- the second part shows you where I used the words from the titles, the 3rd part IS all the titles.

Connie Marcum Wong October 1, 2015 at 9:24 PM Excellent Debbie! As always, I enjoy your work!

Phyllis Babcock September 25, 2015 at 12:19 PM Very neat on how you did this poem. love phyl

Andrea Dietrich September 21, 2015 at 2:47 PM Debs. Is this that contest about song titles? Or perhaps based on your own poetry titles. It sure is looking cool how you did it. If it were an acrostic contest, you spelled BRAIN!! Debbie Guzzi September 21, 2015 at 4:02 PM It was the contest using all the songs titles on a record ablum?

Afolabi Muideen September 18, 2015 at 6:25 PM I dropped by to say Hi.......love always dear poet..........A.M. Debbie Guzzi September 18, 2015 at 7:58 PM Thank you SO much!

Eric Boddie September 16, 2015 at 9:25 PM so many claim....to understand the brain....working at only 10% function....what is an acceptable percentage of usage that would allow one to make such a gumption....;)

Viv Wigley September 16, 2015 at 12:23 AM Very clever, Debbie, all woven beautifully. Good luck and well done. Viv x

Neva Romaine September 14, 2015 at 2:24 PM Hey Debbie, stopped by for a visit. This is an amazing work of art from you. Excellent in form and imagery. (The picture fits perfectly). All the best in the contest too! Be Blessed, Neva

Anne-Lise Andresen September 12, 2015 at 1:58 PM - Of best quality, as always Debbie - Good luck in the contest - Best wishes for a beautiful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud September 12, 2015 at 2:26 AM stunning use of enjambment, debbie!.. greeat write!.. huggs

Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 6:02 PM A well and extreme brilliant write.....at times, truth seems to be a poison but it is stimulant to life. The importance of friendship is to breath out reality to each. I love the flow of your write the truth within intoxicated me as a drunkard....excellence........A.M.

Jan Allison September 11, 2015 at 4:33 PM Very clever acrostic Debbie I like the creative way you have broken some of the words down - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx