Pushed Too Far and Now I'Ve Snapped

My brain is totally tapped
Something in me finally snapped
My blood pressures on the rise
Flames are shooting from my eyes
Getting feverish and hot
Tightness is about to start
In my hands as fists are closing
Signs of anger surely showing
Veins in my head fastly thumping
Stress is furiously pumping
Through every inch and every space
Redness on my cheeks and face
Tremors causing me to shake
Like a dangerous earthquake
That will do a lot of damage
I can not control or manage
These emotions so watch out
Smoke is coming from my "snout"
I'm a bull about to charge
Painful sharp horns big and large
So stay clear out of my path
At full force I will attack
Everyone who's been a jerk
In my life causing the hurt
Making me go this insane
Revenge is such a deadly game
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Costello Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 10:55 AM
I really liked your rhyming here and the lead ins from line to line. Very creative. :-) Christine
Manassian Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 10:50 PM
It is good to be able to vent in poetry! You have done that superbly well! I hope whoever is bothering you is wise enough to stay clear! Loved the bull analogy.
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