Purpling Shadows- Glosse

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~Purpling Shadows~ 
 ( Glosse)


 ~Cabeza~ 

 I want you when the shades of eve are falling 
 And purpling shadows drift across the land, 
 When sleepy bird to loving mates are calling- 
 I want the soothing softness of your hand. 

 (Inspired by the poem 'I Want You' by Arthur L. Gillom) 


 I want you no matter what tides the year may bring 
 In winter and autumn in summer and spring 
 When as a sweet song your name in a whisper I sing 
 I want you when the shades of eve are falling 

 When the mountains sings and raises at sea aglow the sand 
 And evergreens and all kind of creatures enlivens the land 
 And birds of every color and songs merrily band 
 When purpling shadows drift across the land 

 I love you and from your love I happily cling 
 I'm flying and dreaming of love beneath your wing 
 Making sweet music together we greet spring 
 When sleepy bird to loving mates are calling- 

 I want you I love you through time sky and land 
 Here and there and in every starlight that shows bright 
 And when the sun and the moon delivers the day and the night
 I want the soothing softness of your hand.


 Dorian Petersen Potter
 aka ladydp2000
 copyright@2015



 June.14.2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/19/2015 2:48:00 PM
A beautiful poem of longing and romance. The imagery is so stunning! Very nicely penned, Dorian!
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Date: 6/24/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Kelly,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Date: 6/13/2015 10:10:00 PM
Hi Dorian: I'm overwhelmed in every stanza of love for this person .
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Date: 6/19/2015 2:00:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Ralph,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Date: 6/13/2015 7:43:00 PM
Wow! I have really read some good poetry this evening! This being one of my favorites...ever! Thanks for sharing your beautiful words! Adding to the favorite list and cheerfully giving you a 7, though, you deserve much more!
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Date: 6/19/2015 1:58:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Anna,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it dear friend and the 7 and fav too:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
Date: 6/13/2015 7:08:00 PM
You nailed it my friend. Adding this one to my fav list. Thanks A7
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Date: 6/19/2015 1:57:00 AM
Thank you ever so kindly Robert,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Much appreciate it all dear friend,the 7 and fav too.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D
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