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PURPLE PREACHING of DAWN

croon, of the rooster, shakes awake the town. purple preaching of dawn, dibbling the dark. bittersweet cockcrow sports orange-yellow, scripts pantaloon of pink sun. thus God winks. curtain’s breach of lace - kaleidoscope, drama’s brand new coat of diverse colors.

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Date: 11/20/2023 2:49:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Tetractys poem in Ink Empress contest, Kim :) - hugs
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Date: 11/18/2023 5:09:00 AM
Beautiful choice of words and flow of descriptive imagery in this. I love the colours used here too. The opening lines stood out for me and the slight alliterations as well as “ curtain’s breach of lace -kaleidoscope, “ love that. Pleasure reading this artistic write that conveys so much, congratulations on your win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/18/2023 6:21:00 AM
Thank you so much! You all inspire me!
Date: 11/16/2023 3:39:00 PM
Hi Kim, gosh, this is beauteous in every line. If this is for the contest, my very best wishes for the win. Awesome write. Have a blessed Thanksgiving with family. ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/16/2023 6:49:00 PM
Happy Thanksgiving and thank you so much!
Date: 11/15/2023 4:00:00 PM
So cool, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2023 6:15:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 11/14/2023 10:45:00 AM
Enjoyable read Kim. Nice imagery. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/15/2023 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 11/14/2023 6:04:00 AM
Splendid images of an inspiring, colorful dawn. Fabulous write, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 11/13/2023 7:44:00 PM
Your imagery is just amazing, Kim! I thoroughly enjoyed the colors, crows, God's wink and lace! Love the title, too. This is a fave. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much! I was hoping you would! Blessings!
Date: 11/13/2023 6:03:00 PM
This is gorgeous and so imaginative. Good luck!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 6:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 6:07:00 PM
Thank you so much, Paige!

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