Purple Meltdown

Purple wig on purple clown
Laughing while he's counting down 

Princess in her gala gown
Through the streets of Chinatown

On her worried face a frown
She's looking for her misplaced crown

While clowns can't do much about her meltdown
He'll at least help to get her home by sundown



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dutta Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 12:35 PM
i love your rhythm n rhyme. All the best.
Gauthier Avatar
January 30, 2019 at 2:20 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.
Mcferran Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Enjoyed this very much- great rhymes, my friend! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 9:35 PM
Thanks, Rhona. Much appreciated.
Fairchild Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 2:34 AM
Really funny! Everything flows so naturally and easily, too! Well Done!
Gauthier Avatar
January 29, 2019 at 9:09 AM
Thanks, Andrew. Much appreciated.
Gentile Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 8:07 AM
I agree with Caren, Line, Loved your rhyme!! Such fun this is, Good luck xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 3:31 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.
Krutsinger Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 4:40 AM
What a selfish clown! Loved the rhyme of this. I would have said "monorhyme", but maybe I would be wrong? Anyway I deeply enjoyed this, Line.
Gauthier Avatar
January 28, 2019 at 7:26 AM
It's a 'rhyme' for the contest... for now. Thanks, Caren.
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