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Purple Meltdown

Purple wig on purple clown Laughing while he's counting down Princess in her gala gown Through the streets of Chinatown On her worried face a frown She's looking for her misplaced crown While the clown can't do much about her meltdown He'll at least help to get her home by sundown AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on January 28, 2019 for contest PURPLE 2 sponsored by KEVIN SHAW

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Date: 1/30/2019 12:35:00 PM
i love your rhythm n rhyme. All the best.
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Date: 1/30/2019 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, Anisha. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/29/2019 6:29:00 PM
Enjoyed this very much- great rhymes, my friend! ;)
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Date: 1/29/2019 9:35:00 PM
Thanks, Rhona. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/29/2019 2:34:00 AM
Really funny! Everything flows so naturally and easily, too! Well Done!
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Date: 1/29/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Andrew. Much appreciated.
Date: 1/28/2019 8:07:00 AM
I agree with Caren, Line, Loved your rhyme!! Such fun this is, Good luck xxoo
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Date: 1/28/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Mike.
Date: 1/28/2019 4:40:00 AM
What a selfish clown! Loved the rhyme of this. I would have said "monorhyme", but maybe I would be wrong? Anyway I deeply enjoyed this, Line.
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Date: 1/28/2019 7:26:00 AM
It's a 'rhyme' for the contest... for now. Thanks, Caren.

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