Purple Crystal Heart

The purple heart, that which beats with pure power Covers the blood flowing throughout the inside This heart will crystallize making me cower Painful transition from flesh to what abides An incredible view these crystals become A purple sparkle, looking though it’s lonesome The glass like object somehow pumps blood along And sings in rhythm with the beat of its song Crystal delves into chamber of the unknown Skimming the blush faced object, warm to the touch Over the cliff of white it falls in what’s blown Exploding in consistent breaths, time as such Record the faith, or love, which reeks of past pains Oh majestic healing forms through lifelong gains Inscribed in mathematical formations are Juxtapositions leaning towards the stars Russell Sivey Contest: METAPHOR: CRYSTAL Sponsor: nette onclaud 3/17/2014 Rispetto 1 is one style, Rispetto 2 is another style
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Gasun Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 7:15 AM
Hi, my very dear friend Russell. I'm so glad to read this sparkling stellar write of yours once again. TYSM again for sharing & my hearty congratulations on your win as well! By the way, TYTYSSM again for ur precious time stopping by on my poem & ur lovely comments. I'm always honored of ur visit my dear friend. I'm sorry to hear about ur computer. Hope it'll be fixed very soon. TYSSM again. I'll be back to read more of ur work soon. Biggest hugs & congrats again! love lots always, Leonora
Onclaud Avatar
March 20, 2014 at 3:58 PM
russell, hope you are okay!.. how are you?.. huggs
Hamilton Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 6:34 PM
congrats on win Russell with this superb poem hugs
A   Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 4:35 PM
Hello Russell :) Congratulations, with your winning poem in "Nette O's CRYSTAL: metaphoric, contest." LUV~LINDA
Mehta Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest of Crystal, russell
A  Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 9:55 PM
Congratulations.... SKAT
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 1:44 PM
quite a gem here, russell... warmest congrats on your win in my contest!.. huggs
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 1:38 PM
- Congratulations on your great win in contest : CRYSTAL - A beautiful poem and a beautiful purpel heart, Russell ! (Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bedave Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 3:05 PM
thats a good poem yu can write my dude
Horne Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 12:11 PM
awesome write here, Russell
Tacito Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 8:35 AM
The imagery here is nothing short of explosive, yet soothing. This was one hell of a read.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 6:42 AM
A masterfully crafted poem! Overwhelmingly brilliant, my friend Russell! A 7! Good luck!
Gasun Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 3:24 AM
I extremely love your magnificent poem about crystal my dear friend Russell. Excellent piece & form as well. I like it a lot. Your note below whetted my interest to study & try about this form. Wish I've enough time. TYSM for sharing! This is a precious gem. I've also written a poem for this contest but I hope I did it right & our dear judge will appreciate it, too. Again tysm for sharing & your lovely comments on my poems. Have a great wkend! love lots & hugs, Leonora
Pettit Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 12:51 AM
This serves as a fine example of a rispetto write. It has both good descriptiveness and rhyming.
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