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Pure Evil

The darkened chambers pierce the veil of sanity, cold lifeless air surrounds and crushes like a vice, eerie silence cannot muffle the wailing voices entombed, death by evil, pure evil, permeates the flesh. George Aul 09/22/2015 For "Four Lines" contest sponsored by Broken Wings.

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Date: 9/28/2015 9:58:00 PM
George, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
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George Aul
Date: 9/29/2015 9:48:00 AM
Thank you much, SKAT :-) ............... George
Date: 9/26/2015 5:48:00 PM
I found this chilling George! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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George Aul
Date: 9/28/2015 9:57:00 AM
Thank you for the "cold" comment :-) ........... George
Date: 9/24/2015 11:46:00 PM
Wonderful true expressions george ! Congrats on big win!
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George Aul
Date: 9/25/2015 9:38:00 AM
Congrats also on your win... thanks for the comment........ George
Date: 9/24/2015 3:34:00 PM
Too much of pure evil in the world today! Congrats on your fine win, George.
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George Aul
Date: 9/25/2015 9:39:00 AM
Thank you and congrats also........... George
Date: 9/24/2015 7:50:00 AM
Chilling! Grats on your win!
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George Aul
Date: 9/25/2015 9:40:00 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting........ George
Date: 9/23/2015 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, George. Hugs Eve
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George Aul
Date: 9/25/2015 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for your comment :-) ........... George
Date: 9/23/2015 12:09:00 PM
Perhaps the flesh lives on after evil takes it. Interesting poem, George.
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George Aul
Date: 9/25/2015 9:36:00 AM
Thank you for the insightful comment.......... George

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