Pure Evil

The darkened chambers pierce the veil of sanity,
cold lifeless air surrounds and crushes like a vice,
eerie silence cannot muffle the wailing voices entombed,
death by evil, pure evil, permeates the flesh.


George Aul

09/22/2015

For "Four Lines" contest sponsored by Broken Wings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 28, 2015 at 9:58 PM
George, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
Aul Avatar
September 29, 2015 at 9:48 AM
Thank you much, SKAT :-) ............... George
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2015 at 5:48 PM
I found this chilling George! congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Aul Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 9:57 AM
Thank you for the "cold" comment :-) ........... George
A. Sharma Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 11:46 PM
Wonderful true expressions george ! Congrats on big win!
Aul Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:38 AM
Congrats also on your win... thanks for the comment........ George
Dietrich Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 3:34 PM
Too much of pure evil in the world today! Congrats on your fine win, George.
Aul Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Thank you and congrats also........... George
Nance Avatar
September 24, 2015 at 7:50 AM
Chilling! Grats on your win!
Aul Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting........ George
Roper Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 6:29 PM
Congratulations on your win, George. Hugs Eve
Aul Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you for your comment :-) ........... George
Inman Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 12:09 PM
Perhaps the flesh lives on after evil takes it. Interesting poem, George.
Aul Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 9:36 AM
Thank you for the insightful comment.......... George
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